The well-being of a society is enhanced when many of its people question authority.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
The well-being of a society lies in the well-being of everyone in the society. When people in the society question their authority, then the society can be enhanced in many ways.
For instance, in the case of government ruling the society, the society can be developed when people in the society question the government regarding their issues. When many of the people question the government regarding the problems they face in the society, then the government will then focus on addressing those issues. The government will become aware of the unknown issues in society when majority of the people in the society question. However, only government cannot address all the issues in the society. It also lies in the hands of every citizen in the society. When every person in the society are responsible, then the society can be developed in many ways. When there is unity in the society, then it can enhance the well-being of the society.
There are many issues which cannot be resolved by normal people in the society. The authority should take responsibility in addressing those issues. When people start questioning the authority regarding their problems, then their society can be enhanced rather than harmed. In the above case, many people in the society will become aware of those issues and these issues can be addressed by the authority or by anyone in the society. For instance, poverty, water scarcity, famine issues in some regions can be addressed by authority not just by people in the society.
If the people don't question the authority, there may be chances that the authority follows its own principles and address only those issues which they are aware of. The authority can be unaware of many issues in the society if people don't question. If there is no one to question the authority, there are chances that the authority will work as they wish and neglect the issues in the society.
There is no harm in questioning the authority about the issues in the society. Indeed, it helps in enhancing the well-being of the society. However, every citizen in the society should also be responsible along with authority in addressing the issues in the society. Thus, the well-being of the society can be enhanced.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, may, regarding, so, then, thus, well, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 19.5258426966 118% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 18.0 12.4196629213 145% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 14.8657303371 27% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.3162921348 97% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 33.0505617978 54% => OK
Preposition: 56.0 58.6224719101 96% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 12.9106741573 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1861.0 2235.4752809 83% => OK
No of words: 375.0 442.535393258 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.96266666667 5.05705443957 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40055868397 4.55969084622 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59106155851 2.79657885939 93% => OK
Unique words: 117.0 215.323595506 54% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.312 0.4932671777 63% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 601.2 704.065955056 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 6.24550561798 32% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.99550561798 120% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 3.10617977528 225% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.2370786517 104% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 23.0359550562 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.0175542105 60.3974514979 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.619047619 118.986275619 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8571428571 23.4991977007 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.28571428571 5.21951772744 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 7.80617977528 26% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 10.2758426966 68% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 5.13820224719 175% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.83258426966 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.254232807731 0.243740707755 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.115797442056 0.0831039109588 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0543562794672 0.0758088955206 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.192824830763 0.150359130593 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0266531311118 0.0667264976115 40% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 14.1392134831 77% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 48.8420337079 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 12.1743820225 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.19 12.1639044944 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.29 8.38706741573 75% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 100.480337079 43% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.8971910112 88% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 11.2143820225 78% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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