Some people say it is important to keep your home and your workplace tidy, with everything organized and in the correct place.
What is your opinion about this?
Many may say and I believe that cleanliness is a half belief. By keeping this view in mind, few individuals believe that tidiness at work and home is an impactful approach to follow. It is also important to place everything at its right place and well organised.
In my opinion, I totally agree with this moot point, however, sometimes a little negligence is acceptable in this respect.
First of all, let's have a look at the benefits of being nice and tidy. If everything at office has placed in correct place, then it would be easier for employees to find out the right file from drawer. Thus, it will save time and energy. In the same way, if the working environment is neat, clean, and dust-free, then the workers would definitely do better in their tasks.
Secondly, the same is the case with environment at home. If the house is nice and tidy, free of dirt and germs, then homies will feel comfortable, relaxed, and healthier than those living in a damped, nasty, and gross environment. For instance, scientific survey proves that people living in damp houses are more prone to diseases.
Thirdly, it has been said that people living in spacious and tidy houses are considered to be broad-minded and open-hearted. Moreover, it also has a significant impact on cognitive abilities of humans.
However, there should be some relaxation if a house wife couldn't manage to keep up her house at sometimes. The flexibility in this respect is important, because they may feel bored and sick of doing routine work.
To recapitulate, I must say that people living in a nice and tidy environment are pro-active, cautious, well-mannered and decent. A well organised set-up depicts a personality and a true reckoning of someone's persona.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: MANY_NN_U[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun may seems to be uncountable; consider using: 'much may', 'a good deal of may'.
Suggestion: Much may; A good deal of may
Many may say and I believe that cleanliness is a...
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Line 9, column 58, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: couldn't
...ould be some relaxation if a house wife couldnt manage to keep up her house at sometime...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, look, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, then, third, thirdly, thus, well, for instance, first of all, in my opinion, in the same way
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1449.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 295.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.91186440678 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14434120667 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80847815636 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.603389830508 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 455.4 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.8787784062 49.4020404114 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.2352941176 106.682146367 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.3529411765 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.47058823529 7.06120827912 134% => OK
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.38176352705 160% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.169903347247 0.244688304435 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.048934690658 0.084324248473 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0459489446958 0.0667982634062 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0780043309101 0.151304729494 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0425295558511 0.056905535591 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 13.0946893788 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.9 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.49 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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