Some people think that educated people are more valuable than people who have learned skills through experience.
Do you think that educated people are the most valuable for society?
What kinds of skills can people learn through experience that can benefit society?
Education is undoubtly made our society more flexible and developed, but some people tend to think that person can study only through experience as well and brings more profit from that.
Considering worldwide sets about successful person it can be easily said that education is the most important part of the success, but nowdays everyone can study any subject you want and the traditional university is not that nessecary anymore. Discussing the positive side of university education, we can't agree that the set program there is complete and includes whole the information to create a broadly educated person. Old professors passes their wisdom and knowledge on younger generations, therefore students gain experience in many various problems, but there is not that bright at all.
Gotten experience in the university certainly provides the better specialist on the market, but if one got the information how it works, it does not mean that person will handle it in the future. Here is argument in favor of one's own experience. The skill and feelings what were gotten from something person did by himself are much valuable than ones were gained inside the university, because there is always something that you have to try before you can get the result, it is vital to feel it by yourself. So these kind of people can be attracted in the working process immediately and successfully tackle the problems unlike a student from the university.
Ending the topik I would say that educated people are really important for development society until they keep passing the skill and knowledge on younger generations, but real profit to the society is brought by people who know how it works by yourself.
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Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
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Message: Did you mean 'this kind' or 'these kinds'?
Suggestion: this kind; these kinds
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, really, so, therefore, well, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1426.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 281.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.07473309609 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09427095027 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6869340793 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.604982206406 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 455.4 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 0.809619238477 618% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 20.2975951904 153% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 61.3985160878 49.4020404114 124% => OK
Chars per sentence: 158.444444444 106.682146367 149% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.2222222222 20.7667163134 150% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 7.06120827912 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.336308648135 0.244688304435 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.110938341012 0.084324248473 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.101423427139 0.0667982634062 152% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.203100111222 0.151304729494 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0839660039712 0.056905535591 148% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.1 13.0946893788 138% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.01 50.2224549098 80% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 11.3001002004 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.72 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.94 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 20.5 9.78957915832 209% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 14.4 10.1190380762 142% => OK
text_standard: 21.0 10.7795591182 195% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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