The plans below show a public park when it first opened in 1920 and the samepark today.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The pair of maps illustrates that the comparision of the public park which was first opened in 1920 and the same park with some changes.
Overall, the public park is located at Arnold avenue.There are many variations given now, when compared to the park which was built in 1920.Let's discuss the changes given to it.
The grand park which is the public park was firstly made in 1920. There are two entrances on the either side of the Eldon street. These entrances have not changed now as well.There are many changes given to the park, let's discuss clearly. In the past, there were two rose gardens on the either sides of the Eldon street, and one at the corner of the street with alternative seats along with the rose gardens but now it has been located at the center of the Arnold avenue with four seats circumferenced to it.There is one rose garden at the north-west which is oppositie to eldon street.Previously, there were fountains and stages for musicians, these have been replaced by the amphitheater for the concerts opposite to the rose gardens.
At the right corner there was pond for the ater plants like water lily,lotus etc, which has been replaced with a childern's play area. Adjacent to it, there is a cafe for the people to have tea/coffee. Just opposite to the it, there is water feature which is a small miniature of waterfall which has attracted many people to tkae photos near it.Adding to it, there is a underground car parking area which is a direct entrance to the water feature. Sadly, the glasshouse which was a part of the public garden has been demolished now.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, so, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 7.0 329% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 3.15609756098 349% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 10.0 5.60731707317 178% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 33.7804878049 124% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1310.0 965.302439024 136% => OK
No of words: 280.0 196.424390244 143% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.67857142857 4.92477711251 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09062348924 3.73543355544 110% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55027009374 2.65546596893 96% => OK
Unique words: 135.0 106.607317073 127% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.482142857143 0.547539520022 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 404.1 283.868780488 142% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 28.0 22.4926829268 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 125.726051397 43.030603864 292% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 131.0 112.824112599 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.0 22.9334400587 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.9 5.23603664747 55% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 1.69756097561 589% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.104352790379 0.215688989381 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.061666026562 0.103423049105 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0769042405017 0.0843802449381 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0979568103501 0.15604864568 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0607152392817 0.0819641961636 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.2329268293 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.98 61.2550243902 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.8 10.3012195122 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.16 11.4140731707 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.13 8.06136585366 101% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 40.7170731707 135% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.9970731707 120% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.