There is an increasing trend around the world to have a small family rather than a large family.
What are some of the advantages and disadvantages of having a small family rather than a large family?
These days, the popularity of having small families is growing in most countries worldwide because of its advantages. However, some sociologists claim that it also causes plenty of social difficulties. In this essay, I will consider both benefits and drawbacks of this phenomenon.
The first advantage is related to special attention and care for a single child. Little families with one child can concentrate more on the upbring and invest more money on education of the single child, which allow them to grow into a mature adult, rather than to disperse limited resource on many children. Another benefit is associated with employment of both parents. In small families, all members can make a living and contribute to family income while their child is either at kindergarten or school, so they can afford holiday abroad or purchase a large apartment and cars. For example, in Kazakhstan many households choose to have one child and earn more money to improve the quality of life rather than have a large family and lead a impoverished existence.
Firstly, an only child tend to become a less socialized adult. Children growing up in small families are inclined to become both shy and reserved, because in comparison to their peers from large families, they only socialize with their parents on restricted topics and are usually unaware of friendship. Secondly, this tendency might result in aging population. In big families two parents are usually substituted by at least two children, which helps avoid aging population, but in societies, where small families prevail, aging becomes an acute problem. For instance, in Germany the government has to accept more immigrants, as young people are prone to form small families and raise a risk of breaking the balance between generations.
In conclusion, although there are a great deal of positive sides of having a small family, it also give rise to many problems in communities.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, while, as to, at least, for example, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1626.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 315.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.1619047619 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21286593061 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7511448864 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 176.041082164 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.609523809524 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 522.0 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 64.9067227108 49.4020404114 131% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.142857143 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.0 7.06120827912 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.341463901828 0.244688304435 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0961559612536 0.084324248473 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0853320252903 0.0667982634062 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.173410802664 0.151304729494 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0653396563016 0.056905535591 115% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.19 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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