The charts below show changes in international student numbers.
The table provides information about change in strength of foreign students in different countries during 2013 and 2014 whereas the bar chart depicts the change in number of students only in South Korea.
Overall, the number of international students studying in various countries rose a little except for South Korea where it slightly declined. There was a steady increase in foreign students there too but the last year saw a little decrease.
Except for South Korea, every other country saw an increase in their number of foreign students in 2014 from previous year. The highest number of international students were enrolled in the USA, which was at 974,926 in 2014. This was more than double the UK’s strength and an impressive 9 times more than South Korea’s. Second most popular country for foreign students was UK with 493,570 pupils in 2014, while China was third with 377,054 students in 2014.
South Korea saw a steady rise in admission of international pupils too, as it increased from 16,832 in 2004 to 86,537 in 2012. Thereafter, it dropped slightly because in 2014 only 84,893 foreign students were studying in the country.
- Nowadays people have greater access to fast food Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages 84
- Advertising has become an unavoidable part of everyone s life Some people say that advertising is a positive part of our lives while others say it is a negative one Discuss both views and include your own opinion 84
- In many developing countries there is a problem with the declining quality of air and water from both industry and construction What measures could be taken to prevent this 84
- The maps below show the town of Tennyson in 1990 and the present day 72
- More cars and traffic on the road This causes traffic jams and excessive pollution People suggest that one way to solve this issue is to increase the price of fuel 84
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 340, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... than South Korea’s. Second most popular country for foreign students was UK with...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, second, so, third, whereas, while, except for
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 33.7804878049 98% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 963.0 965.302439024 100% => OK
No of words: 189.0 196.424390244 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.09523809524 4.92477711251 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.70779275107 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52794908592 2.65546596893 95% => OK
Unique words: 102.0 106.607317073 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.539682539683 0.547539520022 99% => OK
syllable_count: 259.2 283.868780488 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.4846621487 43.030603864 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.0 112.824112599 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0 22.9334400587 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 5.23603664747 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 3.70975609756 216% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.238419578656 0.215688989381 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.109847124073 0.103423049105 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0846107141393 0.0843802449381 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.167053543411 0.15604864568 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0768935922619 0.0819641961636 94% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.2329268293 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 61.2550243902 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.3012195122 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.3 11.4140731707 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.69 8.06136585366 95% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 40.7170731707 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.