Your colleague is traveling from another country by plane for a meeting. You have arranged the airport pickup, hotel accommodation and planned his/her meetings. Write a letter to your colleague.
In your letter, you should:
say when and where you will meet him/her
explain where he/she will stay
tell him/her about the other arrangements you made.
Dear Ms. Casey,
I hope you will find this letter in the best of health and happiness. As you know, we have to attend the meeting with our new clients of quality foods in Ireland. I believe you would have prepared the documentation work.
I would request you to please come to my office to collect the air ticket and hotel accommodation details at the end of the day. You will be staying in the Plaza hotel in the central street downtown Dublin. The stay will be for three days in which you have lined up the meeting with new clients according to their schedule and hoping that you would sign an agreement on the business terms which we have discussed earlier with our quality foods client.
Besides, you do not worry about transport facilities since I have hired a guy whom you will meet at the Dublin Airport. His name is Arvink D Lee, and he has a blue-yellow taxi cab. His number is 02890283. Once your flight gets to land, please call him and he will pick up from the Airport and will be taking you to all the destinations till the time you will be staying in Dublin.
On the last day, I have booked reservations for you and our new customer to the Club Kingswell since you like to go Clubbing. You will love the food and drinks, and please update me once you will sing the deal with our quality food client.
I am looking forward to seeing you soon in my office.
Yours faithfully,
Shwatank Bhasin
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, look, so, well, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 4.92783505155 244% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 41.0 32.9175257732 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 36.0 26.3917525773 136% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1168.0 937.175257732 125% => OK
No of words: 262.0 206.0 127% => OK
Chars per words: 4.45801526718 4.54256449028 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02323427807 3.78020617076 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.30204252825 2.54303337028 91% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 127.690721649 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.564885496183 0.622605031667 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 332.1 290.88556701 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.13402061856 131% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.6755895336 44.8134815571 126% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.4285714286 76.5299724578 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7142857143 16.8248392259 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.35714285714 4.34317383033 54% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.346137183823 0.216113520407 160% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.122422566059 0.0766984524023 160% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0527622441417 0.0603063233224 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.192045796377 0.12726935374 151% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0678573407871 0.0580467560999 117% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.9 8.37731958763 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 78.59 70.7449484536 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.59 8.71597938144 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.0 7.59969072165 92% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 41.2886597938 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.