People are surrounded by all kinds of advertising. Some people believe that advertising has a negative effect on people’s lives. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It is true that the majority of countries have experienced a growing popularity of advertisements. While I agree that advertising exerts detrimental effects on individuals, I believe that the benefit of ads is more important.
Admittedly, advertisements bring some negative influences. The main disadvantage is that advertisements usually exaggerate the quality of commodities, so customers seem not to have a sense of satisfaction and happiness after purchasing them. It is alleged that nowadays, the majority of people lose their trust in advertising because advertisements often deliberately overstate the function of items, especially luxurious ones. Another aspect is that youngsters often cope with financial difficulties when they spend much money on buying products that are advertised by their idols. These days, many companies cooperate with a variety of celebrities to catch the youth’s attention who believe that sharing the same items with idols brings some special meanings.
Despite the valid argument mentioned above, I believe that the positive impacts of advertisement are more valuable. First of all, advertising is the most direct way to inform customers of a given product’s quality. When a company premiers an advertisement this is evidence that they are generating enough revenue to validate whatever product they sell or service they provide. Secondly, advertising does not simply meet needs; it creates them. Most people could live more fulfilling lives with fewer products but advertising stimulates desires by appealing to consumer psychology and those initial wants eventually become habitual. A good example of this would be the rise of Apple products in the last two decades and the role of advertising in making them popular. Stylish ads like the ‘think different’ campaign helped foster their dominance.
In conclusion, I firmly hold the view that advertising is a beneficial phenomenon for all with a number of insignificant drawbacks. It is therefore important that consumers and officials should be mindful of the full contribution of advertisers.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, while, in conclusion, first of all, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 15.0 7.30460921844 205% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1780.0 1615.20841683 110% => OK
No of words: 316.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.63291139241 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21620550194 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.19777502363 2.80592935109 114% => OK
Unique words: 201.0 176.041082164 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.636075949367 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 568.8 506.74238477 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.1293690688 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.25 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.75 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.9375 7.06120827912 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.271960185191 0.244688304435 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0816259761363 0.084324248473 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0640932727843 0.0667982634062 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.143707100476 0.151304729494 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.053690726651 0.056905535591 94% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.27 50.2224549098 70% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.37 12.4159519038 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.98 8.58950901804 116% => OK
difficult_words: 108.0 78.4519038076 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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