Write a letter to your neighbour requesting that something be done about the dog. Include in your letter:
- Your reason for writing
- What you would like to happen
- A nice, respectful style
Dear John,
It would be grateful if you can do something about the continuously barking of your dog after sunset till mid night. Let me explain it further.
It’s being long, I have noticed that your dog starts barking after dawn and continues till late night. As I am a student and also work as a part timer, so it becomes difficult for me to concentrate on study and sleep on time. Also, I stay next to your house so the sound is really prominent. Moreover, I am now suffering from sleep disorder that is leading to my ill health. Therefore, I would like to request you to take your dog to veterinary doctor, as there is a possibility he might have bad health, also keep a check if your dog is not hungry at that time.
I hope that you will consider my request and will take a commitment of not getting it repeated without keeping any harsh feelings, as we are neighbors.
I really look forward to your cooperation in this.
Yours sincerely
Eva
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 10, column 16, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... cooperation in this. Yours sincerely Eva
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, look, moreover, really, so, therefore
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 32.9175257732 100% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 26.3917525773 80% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 789.0 937.175257732 84% => OK
No of words: 176.0 206.0 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.48295454545 4.54256449028 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.64232057368 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51636559667 2.54303337028 99% => OK
Unique words: 113.0 127.690721649 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.642045454545 0.622605031667 103% => OK
syllable_count: 239.4 290.88556701 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.9149304151 44.8134815571 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.9 76.5299724578 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6 16.8248392259 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.7 4.34317383033 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.27710798629 0.216113520407 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.104281037848 0.0766984524023 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0844295325523 0.0603063233224 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.143740028988 0.12726935374 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0707881018608 0.0580467560999 122% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.5 8.37731958763 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 70.7449484536 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.41 8.71597938144 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.17 7.59969072165 94% => OK
difficult_words: 30.0 41.2886597938 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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