Your next door neighbour owns a small dog that barks throughout the day and the night.
Write a letter to your neighbour requesting that something be done about the dog. Include in your letter:
- Your reason for writing
- What you would like to happen
- A nice, respectful style
Dear Mrs. David,
I hope you’re doing well. I am writing in connecting with your puppy and I think it called Lucy. Before two years ago I had one too, and forced to put it at the shelter because I was very busy person. I fascinate in small pets but when they grow up, they be more annoyed.
For fortnight ago, the high voice from Lucy look conspicuous for me specifically during the evening. As you know, I am working as civil engineer, and my shift starting from dawn to dusk, so that, I faced a problem to sleep at night from this voice. Another neighbor at second floor told me he heard the same barks among the day too,
I recommend you should take your dog and go to animal clinic as soon as possible to do some checks up and find the issue for this barks. The pets in this age need to take a lot of medicine to improve their resentment for illness, which it important for your dog health. If you can’t take cares about Lucy during the day, there are a lot of pets sitter right now. Finally, I have a seasoned doctor contact could be helpful for you, just let me know to sent it for you.
Thanks for your time and hope to invite you to visit my home and drink some juice together at your convenience time.
Yours sincerely,
Awad ELshikh
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Mrs. David, I hope you’re doing we...
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Line 4, column 273, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...hen they grow up, they be more annoyed. For fortnight ago, the high voice from L...
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Line 6, column 126, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...o some checks up and find the issue for this barks. The pets in this age need to tak...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, if, look, second, so, well, i think, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 32.9175257732 122% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 31.0 26.3917525773 117% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1024.0 937.175257732 109% => OK
No of words: 239.0 206.0 116% => OK
Chars per words: 4.28451882845 4.54256449028 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.93187294222 3.78020617076 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.16200205868 2.54303337028 85% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 127.690721649 124% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.661087866109 0.622605031667 106% => OK
syllable_count: 312.3 290.88556701 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 4.0 1.83505154639 218% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.3715346422 44.8134815571 119% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.3333333333 76.5299724578 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.9166666667 16.8248392259 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.91666666667 4.34317383033 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.244966758653 0.216113520407 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0810687741901 0.0766984524023 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0622539747886 0.0603063233224 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.132483972824 0.12726935374 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0549102382381 0.0580467560999 95% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.7 8.37731958763 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 77.57 70.7449484536 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.54 8.71597938144 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.96 7.59969072165 92% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 41.2886597938 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.