Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
The rules that societies today expect young people to follow and obey are too strict.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
It goes without saying that in this progressive and sophisticated era in which we are living societies make some certain rules for young people. There has been a controversial debate as to whether rules and policies existing is today's world are extremely strict for youth. From my perspective, these rules are easy and not difficult to follow, and two reasons to support my viewpoint are presented as follows.
Firstly, rules for juveniles are not difficult since some important concepts have changed through the time. It is not a secret to anyone that nowadays people especially young ones have convenient lives in comparison with their ancestors. In the past, juveniles have to work really hard to earn money for the living and help their families to meet their financial obligations because aiding parents and siblings was one of their most important tasks, but we are witnessing that in the present time young people are more independent are they do not have such heavy responsibilities, helping families, in this era. To put it in more vivid picture, my grandfather have told me an story about his life when he was a young brave man, according to him in that time children of a family especially boys have to respect parents all the time and they must have preferred parents opinions upon their own; having considered this, my grandfather could not go to university because his parents asked him to stay close and help them in the farming. Had my grandfather lived in the present era, he would not have to do whatever his parents want. As you can see, some basic principles and disciplines have changed, meaning young people are not facing strict rules in societies.
Furthermore, young people are not obeying hard rules and commend because they are the most significant parts of a population. It is crystal clear that young people have really vital responsibilities in this world since they are being considered as potential individuals making progress in community and make the economic progress. As youth have really important duties to do, politicians and families do not usually set some rules that are hard to obey. For instance, when I was a university student, all collegians were allowed to express their idea and thoughts publically, actually we had expression freedom, in order to be supported by other people and turn into more open-minded people, which means university never enacted difficult rules because students and juveniles are precise capacities. Had rules been hard to obey, I would not be allowed to explain my ideas and beliefs publically.
In sum, having aforementioned reasons and examples into account, rules are not strict for youth. Not only have some principles changed, but young people are the most important parts of every country.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 184, Rule ID: WHETHER[6]
Message: Can you shorten this phrase to just 'whether', or rephrase the sentence to avoid "as to"?
Suggestion: whether
.... There has been a controversial debate as to whether rules and policies existing is todays w...
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Line 2, column 673, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...id picture, my grandfather have told me an story about his life when he was a youn...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, really, so, as to, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 28.0 15.1003584229 185% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 13.8261648746 137% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 46.0 43.0788530466 107% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 52.1666666667 96% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2376.0 1977.66487455 120% => OK
No of words: 459.0 407.700716846 113% => OK
Chars per words: 5.17647058824 4.8611393121 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.62863751936 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74740194497 2.67179642975 103% => OK
Unique words: 229.0 212.727598566 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.498910675381 0.524837075471 95% => OK
syllable_count: 735.3 618.680645161 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.1344086022 139% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 103.845118295 48.9658058833 212% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 148.5 100.406767564 148% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.6875 20.6045352989 139% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.9375 5.45110844103 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.177363977806 0.236089414692 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0759822234134 0.076458572812 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0422205952388 0.0737576698707 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.129595362745 0.150856017488 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0352624496251 0.0645574589148 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.3 11.7677419355 147% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.06 58.1214874552 74% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 10.1575268817 140% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.36 10.9000537634 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.6 8.01818996416 107% => OK
difficult_words: 104.0 86.8835125448 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.0537634409 131% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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