Some people believe that visitors to other countries should follow local customs and behaviour. Others disagree and think that the host country should welcome cultural differences.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Nowadays, more and more people around the world come to different countries to study higher education or got better work. Some people think tourists and visitors should follow their local traditions. In my opinion, at this moment is global citizenship century so I think it's not only visitors adapted to the new culture in new environments and should follow local customs but also the native should welcome to the diverse traditions from many countries.
Firstly, understanding the culture of the host country maybe become the advantage also the positive impacts with visitors, especially international students. They will not be in the cultural shock, it will help them feel more comfortable with new environment and they can make new friends easier. Regarding people who work or immigrate to the host country, follow and accept will help them less in trouble because of different traditions. The study is a good example for follow the rules of local people. In North Korea, students can not use a calculator in maths exams but contrary to this country, we can take maths exams by the calculator in another country. Furthermore, people have chances to show off their respects to the local community and they can receive more kindness and love from the host country.
On other hand, it takes a long time to adapt new cultural even that you are so familiar with the move to another country. I think the host country also needs to accept and willing with international culture. The reason is it's maybe difficult for visitors to follow the culture, so the host country has to welcome them in a friendly way. Like visitors who come to the host country try to avoid cultural shock so it also helps people in the host country come to another environment, will not in this problem. This seems like a good opportunity to share kinds of music, dance, food, language between natives and visitors. However, it also brings many advantages to the national economy.
In conclusion, I think both host countries or visitors are bringing many advantages to each other so I believe both of them should welcome cultural differences. Cultural diversity does not only show how to internationalize are your country, but it also brings many cultures in many countries to become in a big family, Earth.
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Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 318, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a friendly way" with adverb for "friendly"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...so the host country has to welcome them in a friendly way. Like visitors who come to the host cou...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, may, regarding, so, as to, i think, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 54.0 41.998997996 129% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1898.0 1615.20841683 118% => OK
No of words: 384.0 315.596192385 122% => OK
Chars per words: 4.94270833333 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.4267276788 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65653593232 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.479166666667 0.561755894193 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 599.4 506.74238477 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.0214097474 49.4020404114 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.647058824 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5882352941 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.88235294118 7.06120827912 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.386618802651 0.244688304435 158% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.125301335309 0.084324248473 149% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.106013231549 0.0667982634062 159% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.255265916848 0.151304729494 169% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0876724560882 0.056905535591 154% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.67 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.77 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 318, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a friendly way" with adverb for "friendly"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...so the host country has to welcome them in a friendly way. Like visitors who come to the host cou...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, may, regarding, so, as to, i think, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 54.0 41.998997996 129% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1898.0 1615.20841683 118% => OK
No of words: 384.0 315.596192385 122% => OK
Chars per words: 4.94270833333 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.4267276788 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65653593232 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.479166666667 0.561755894193 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 599.4 506.74238477 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.0214097474 49.4020404114 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.647058824 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5882352941 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.88235294118 7.06120827912 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.386618802651 0.244688304435 158% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.125301335309 0.084324248473 149% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.106013231549 0.0667982634062 159% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.255265916848 0.151304729494 169% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0876724560882 0.056905535591 154% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.67 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.77 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.