Deciding futur career is a crucial thing that any indivitual concern. whether ,in the past it was easier to identify what job would lead to successful futur or not. This can be weighed in many aspects. Some believe that in the past is very easy to figure out the suitible career. Other believe the opposite. In my opinion. I do not concur with the statement that before many decades, it was easy to choose our long live career. In the following essay, I will elaborate on a couple reason wth examples to explain my point of view.
First, and foremost, to day the world face a huge impovewment in techology, like computers and smart phone. these devices facilitate our social communication and increase our horizane in many aspects of life. This will help as to search and take many impression in all field and concentrate on perfect one. For example, when I was in high school. I did my search to be aware about any feild which can especialize with and make me get a good career. Then after profouf rearching. I decided to attend dental school. right kown I m a dentist, and realy aproud of my decission. From that compelling example, we can see the who easy to select our futur job by using technology to facilitate our selection.
Second, the other reason which springs to my mind is, now a days people are more educated than before. this is example from my real live. My parent have bachelor degree, they are aware about the importance of education to get our dream job. In contrast to my grand father and grand mother, therefore, my parent pay attention to my education more than their parent did. As we know, any employer prefer to hire high educated people. As we can see, to day high educated parent will be helpful in identifying there kids jobs.
In conclusion, the statement is not as persuasive as it stands. this is based on exposition that mentioned above which explain that to day it it easy to choose our career than past due to the improvement of technology and increase of our parent awareness about the importance of education to get a suitable future job.
Deciding futur career is a crucial thing that any indivitual concern. whether ,in the past it was easier to identify what job would lead to successful futur or not. This can be weighed in many aspects. Some believe that in the past is very easy to figure out the suitible career. Other believe the opposite. In my opinion. I do not concur with the statement that before many decades, it was easy to choose our long live career. In the following essay, I will elaborate on a couple reason wth examples to explain my point of view.
First, and foremost, to day the world face a huge impovewment in techology, like computers and smart phone. these devices facilitate our social communication and increase our horizane in many aspects of life. This will help as to search and take many impression in all field and concentrate on perfect one. For example, when I was in high school. I did my search to be aware about any feild which can especialize with and make me get a good career. Then after profouf rearching. I decided to attend dental school. right kown I m a dentist, and realy aproud of my decission. From that compelling example, we can see the who easy to select our futur job by using technology to facilitate our selection.
Second, the other reason which springs to my mind is, now a days people are more educated than before. this is example from my real live. My parent have bachelor degree, they are aware about the importance of education to get our dream job. In contrast to my grand father and grand mother, therefore, my parent pay attention to my education more than their parent did. As we know, any employer prefer to hire high educated people. As we can see, to day high educated parent will be helpful in identifying there kids jobs.
In conclusion, the statement is not as persuasive as it stands. this is based on exposition that mentioned above which explain that to day it it easy to choose our career than past due to the improvement of technology and increase of our parent awarness about the importance of education to get a suitible futur job.A
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, second, so, then, therefore, as to, for example, in conclusion, in contrast, in contrast to, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 46.0 43.0788530466 107% => OK
Preposition: 61.0 52.1666666667 117% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.0752688172 161% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1706.0 1977.66487455 86% => OK
No of words: 371.0 407.700716846 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.59838274933 4.8611393121 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.38877662729 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54355195944 2.67179642975 95% => OK
Unique words: 197.0 212.727598566 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.530997304582 0.524837075471 101% => OK
syllable_count: 555.3 618.680645161 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.59856630824 146% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.94265232975 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 20.6003584229 121% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.1344086022 70% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 47.8101913822 48.9658058833 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 68.24 100.406767564 68% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.84 20.6045352989 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.68 5.45110844103 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.5376344086 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 12.0 4.88709677419 246% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.340117733588 0.236089414692 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0920877383753 0.076458572812 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.129766387203 0.0737576698707 176% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.233254612884 0.150856017488 155% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.226438328108 0.0645574589148 351% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.7 11.7677419355 65% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 58.1214874552 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.1575268817 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.81 10.9000537634 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.52 8.01818996416 94% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 86.8835125448 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 10.002688172 50% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.0537634409 76% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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