Internet has influenced the way of life of the people, nowadays people are started behaving same. What extent are agree or disagree?
It is fact that the internet has changed the way of our living and the economy of the nations, although the world will become global village. Therefore, some people believe that in the future the human will become homogeneous in terms of thinking and behaving. If asked, I certainly agree with such an opinion to a large extent and the reasons for my standard will be analyzed further.
There are several reasons behind why people believe that the everybody will be the same. Firstly, the internet is known as the ocean of information. By this I mean, nowadays, the majority of people exposed to the internet, through it, they enable themselves to learn culture about different countries, also follow them. For instance, in India, Indians now celebrate Mother's Day and Father's Day, which are the festivals of the Western countries.
Secondly, through the internet communication is become easy and effective. It is proven that the good communication could help to expand the business. What I mean to say by this is that there are a number of MNCs and clothes and footwear outlets are opened in the different nations. Therefore, in millennium days, people working in the same atmosphere, also follow the same fashion trend.
However, it would be wrong to believe that in the future people will become the same, as they have their different tradition and culture. By this I mean, today's Indian following the western culture, language and fashion, nevertheless they do not forget to touch feet of their elderly, as a blessing.
In conclusion, I reiterate that through the internet people can celebrate same festivals, such as a Mother's Day and Father's Day, also wear the same clothes, although they would not behave and think in the same way in the future, as they have their own culture.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 58, Rule ID: DT_PRP[1]
Message: Possible typo. Did you mean 'the' or 'everybody'?
Suggestion: the; everybody
... reasons behind why people believe that the everybody will be the same. Firstly, the internet...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, however, if, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, therefore, for instance, i mean, in conclusion, such as, in the same way
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1495.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 302.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.95033112583 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1687104957 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59253761032 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.516556291391 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 462.6 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.725438606 49.4020404114 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.785714286 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5714285714 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.2142857143 7.06120827912 145% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.23633525788 0.244688304435 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0761137539032 0.084324248473 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0581125770171 0.0667982634062 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.132724748286 0.151304729494 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0420445171086 0.056905535591 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.43 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.13 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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