Nowadays, many families have both parents working. Some working parents believe family members like grandparents can take care of their children, while others think childcare centers provide the best care. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Working parents have different opinions about childcare. While some parents believed that children should be looked after by family members, I would argue that it is better for children to attend day nurseries. In this essay, arguments of both views will be examine.
On the one hand, there are several reasons why a group of working parents are looking to relatives for help with childcare. Firstly, it is helps to reduce the expensive child care costs. Although parents should always offer to compensate for relative care, the cost will likely be much less than the childcare expense at nursery. Secondly, raising children by relatives will boost the strong bonds and narrow the generation gap between them. For instance, it is estimated that young children under the age of schooling looked after by their grandparents are likely to become more family-oriented and appreciate the value of a happy family.
On the other hand, it is my belief that children should attend childcare centers with such qualified caring teachers because of some reasons. The first reason is that professional childcare centers often offer the best thoughtful services to care for children. For example, the children's meals are always prepared carefully with sufficient nutritious ingredients in order to boost their physical development. Additionally, children can develop their thinking skills as well as raise general awareness of the surrounding world at day care center. For instance, in advanced nursery schools, qualified teachers help to boost children’s curiosity and build their confidence through different play-based learning activities. Overall, the benefits of caring for a child at nursery is clearly seen.
In conclusion, while there are reasons why parents should ask relatives for taking care their children, I believe preschool allows children the opportunity to raise their physical and mental development.
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- Nowadays many families have both parents working Some working parents believe family members like grandparents can take care of their children while others think childcare centers provide the best care Discuss both views and give your opinion 73
- Nowadays many families have both parents working Some working parents believe family members like grandparents can take care of their children while others think childcare centers provide the best care Discuss both views and give your opinion 73
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, look, second, secondly, so, well, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1618.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 295.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.48474576271 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14434120667 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76369952191 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.569491525424 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 486.9 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.5345749596 49.4020404114 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.866666667 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6666666667 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.8 7.06120827912 125% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.338911586785 0.244688304435 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.113712532286 0.084324248473 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0575742430456 0.0667982634062 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.214381080428 0.151304729494 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0416663858843 0.056905535591 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.5 12.4159519038 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.7 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.