The graph below shows UK acid rain emissions measured in millions of tonnes from four different sectors between 1990 and 2007

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The graph below shows UK acid rain emissions, measured in millions of tonnes,
from four different sectors between 1990 and 2007.

The line graph illustrates the amount of acid rain emissions was produced over a period of 17 years, in four different sections, from 1990 to 2007 in Britain.
Overall, the data on acid rain emissions in the UK witnessed a considerable decline between 1990 and 2007. The most dramatic decrease was seen in the electricity, gas and water supply sector.
In 1990, approximately 3.3 million tonnes of acid rain emissions was produced by the electricity, gas and water sector, which was the highest figure of the year. The transport and communication sector contributed about 0.7 million tonnes of emissions, followed by the domestic sector with around 0.6 million tonnes. The total quantities of other industries were close to 2 million tonnes.
Between 1990 to 2007, there was a downward trend in the figures for almost categories. The highest drop of almost 3 million tonnes was saw in the emissions from electricity. The figures for acid rain gases from the domestic sector went down minimally, bottoming out at 0.3 million in 2007; meanwhile, the transport and communication sector saw a slight increase in emissions, reaching a peak of 1 million tonnes in 2005. Additionally, there was an insignificant decrease of around 0.7 million tonnes in the other industries from 1990 to 2007.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 135, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'sawed', 'sawn', 'seen'.
Suggestion: sawed; sawn; seen
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Line 4, column 543, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...the other industries from 1990 to 2007.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 0.0 5.60731707317 0% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 33.7804878049 121% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1080.0 965.302439024 112% => OK
No of words: 211.0 196.424390244 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.11848341232 4.92477711251 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.81127787577 3.73543355544 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90254858739 2.65546596893 109% => OK
Unique words: 106.0 106.607317073 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.502369668246 0.547539520022 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 315.0 283.868780488 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 8.0 4.33902439024 184% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.6617212499 43.030603864 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.0 112.824112599 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1 22.9334400587 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.4 5.23603664747 27% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.465436113463 0.215688989381 216% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.190773139878 0.103423049105 184% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0948452892977 0.0843802449381 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.295606414967 0.15604864568 189% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0358354256653 0.0819641961636 44% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.2329268293 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 61.2550243902 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.3012195122 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 11.4140731707 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.05 8.06136585366 100% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 40.7170731707 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.4329268293 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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