You recently organized an all-day meeting for your company, which took place in a local hotel. In their feedback, participants at the meeting said that they like the hotel, but they were unhappy about the food that was served for lunch.
Write a letter to the manager of the hotel. In your letter:
• Say what the participants like about the hotel
• explain why they were unhappy about the food
• suggest what the manager should do to improve the food in future.
Dear Mr. Smith,
I am writing to draw your attention about the feedback I have received from the employees attended the meeting held at your hotel.
I would like to recommend the possible amendments in your menu.
As far as the visit is concerned, I have had an annual seminar in your hotel at 12-05-21 from 9:00 a.m to 8:00 p.m. The venue had been suggested by my colleagues with respect to the last year experience. Although, you have provided splendid and spacious ambience. The participants never had any difficulty regarding parking space and the security staff have guided the visitors properly to the main hall.
However, the participants have complaint about the food provided. Unfortunately, the cuisines they have had was not according to the standards mentioned in your menu.The food quality especially sandwiches were not freshly made and the spring rolls were soggy. Apart from that meat was not succulent and tender, but overcooked.
As as solution, I would suggest you to the make a notice of it and do some efforts to change your menu. I have heard that your previous chef has resigned due to sickness. So could you please take a notice of it and do some alterations accordingly. Otherwise, that time wouldn't be far when you will lose your customers, I am afraid!
Yours sincerely,
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 109, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'been'.
Suggestion: been
...fortunately, the cuisines they have had was not according to the standards mentione...
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Line 7, column 167, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: The
...to the standards mentioned in your menu.The food quality especially sandwiches were...
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Line 9, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: As
...ucculent and tender, but overcooked. As as solution, I would suggest you to the ma...
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Line 9, column 270, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: wouldn't
...tions accordingly. Otherwise, that time wouldnt be far when you will lose your customer...
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Line 12, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...mers, I am afraid! Yours sincerely,
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, but, however, if, regarding, so, apart from, i am afraid, with respect to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 32.9175257732 82% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1093.0 937.175257732 117% => OK
No of words: 221.0 206.0 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.94570135747 4.54256449028 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.85565412703 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73635589391 2.54303337028 108% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 127.690721649 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.633484162896 0.622605031667 102% => OK
syllable_count: 327.6 290.88556701 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 5.0 0.824742268041 606% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.7158593073 44.8134815571 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.0833333333 76.5299724578 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4166666667 16.8248392259 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.16666666667 4.34317383033 165% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.202262932335 0.216113520407 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0671997611261 0.0766984524023 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0511065031421 0.0603063233224 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.114494305398 0.12726935374 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0628612546125 0.0580467560999 108% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 8.37731958763 133% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 70.7449484536 87% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.43 8.71597938144 131% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.67 7.59969072165 114% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 41.2886597938 140% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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