Dear Sir/Madam,
My name is Jay Thomas and I am working in the GIP Engineering Company which had planned a whole day conference at your hotel. I am writing this to let you know about the reviews given by members.
First of all, everyone was extremely satisfied by the ambience of the hotel. It was spectacular and sitting arrangement was the best out of all. The small round tables for the group of 4-5 people was a thoughtful idea to accommodate large number of people.
Sadly, the response towards your food service was worst. There was no coordination between your staff so that many people were not able to get food on right time. Moreover, the quality of some food items such as soup and starters can be improved. The rest of the food items were on average level.
Let me give you some suggestions. The manager can provide some kind of training to their staff. This is how you can avoid mismanagement. Furthermore, hiring better chef can be a good idea. I know some best chefs of this town who are ready to work with your hotel.
Thank you for your consideration.
Yours faithfully,
Jay Thomas
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 16, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Sir/Madam, My name is Jay Thomas and I am working i...
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, moreover, so, kind of, such as, you know, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 7.48453608247 174% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 32.9175257732 64% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 912.0 937.175257732 97% => OK
No of words: 197.0 206.0 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.62944162437 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.74642080493 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5853863796 2.54303337028 102% => OK
Unique words: 129.0 127.690721649 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.654822335025 0.622605031667 105% => OK
syllable_count: 278.1 290.88556701 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 5.0 0.824742268041 606% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 12.6804123711 126% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 16.3608247423 73% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.3768003582 44.8134815571 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 57.0 76.5299724578 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.3125 16.8248392259 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.625 4.34317383033 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.225494486468 0.216113520407 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0690396762314 0.0766984524023 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0434645750556 0.0603063233224 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.126930097971 0.12726935374 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.035486765711 0.0580467560999 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.5 8.37731958763 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 76.22 70.7449484536 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 7.45979381443 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.69 8.71597938144 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.36 7.59969072165 97% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 41.2886597938 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 8.62886597938 81% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.8 8.54432989691 80% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 16, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Sir/Madam, My name is Jay Thomas and I am working i...
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, moreover, so, kind of, such as, you know, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 7.48453608247 174% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 32.9175257732 64% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 912.0 937.175257732 97% => OK
No of words: 197.0 206.0 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.62944162437 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.74642080493 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5853863796 2.54303337028 102% => OK
Unique words: 129.0 127.690721649 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.654822335025 0.622605031667 105% => OK
syllable_count: 278.1 290.88556701 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 5.0 0.824742268041 606% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 12.6804123711 126% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 16.3608247423 73% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.3768003582 44.8134815571 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 57.0 76.5299724578 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.3125 16.8248392259 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.625 4.34317383033 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.225494486468 0.216113520407 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0690396762314 0.0766984524023 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0434645750556 0.0603063233224 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.126930097971 0.12726935374 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.035486765711 0.0580467560999 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.5 8.37731958763 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 76.22 70.7449484536 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 7.45979381443 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.69 8.71597938144 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.36 7.59969072165 97% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 41.2886597938 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 8.62886597938 81% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.8 8.54432989691 80% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.