You rescently organised an all day meeting meeting for your company, which took place in a local hotel. In their feedback, participants at the meeting said that they liked the hotel, but they were unhappy about the food that was served for lunch.
Write a letter to the manager of the hotel and in your letter,
Say what participants like
explain why they were unhappy about the food
suggest what manager should do to improve the food
I am writing this letter to provide feedback for the sevice provided by your hotel, "The Taj" to our company, "the Tilo" for all day meeting on 23rd March 2023.
I am really glad to share that thew customer service provided by the crew at the hotel was really amazing. For instance, when we enter ,they welcome us with soft drink and then showed us the direction for the meeting room in polite manner. Furthermore, the sitting arrangement was appropriate as per the meeting. It allowed the viewers to have the clear view of speaker and vis-e-versa.
The only thing, that dissappointed us was the improper labeling next to the serving counter of the food. Some of our participants were vegitarian. As the cuisine that on the table did not had any name or the ingridents mentioned next to the vessel made it inconvenient for our visitors to find what they are eating. In order to address this issue, I will suggest you to put labels along with ingridents list next to the serving pot.
However, It was great exprience and we would love to have some other meeting organized there if our concern is kept in mind.
Thanking you
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 135, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...lly amazing. For instance, when we enter ,they welcome us with soft drink and then...
^^
Line 5, column 150, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... of our participants were vegitarian. As the cuisine that on the table did not ha...
^^
Line 5, column 190, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'did' requires the base form of the verb: 'have'
Suggestion: have
... the cuisine that on the table did not had any name or the ingridents mentioned ne...
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, however, if, really, so, then, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 32.9175257732 76% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 955.0 937.175257732 102% => OK
No of words: 200.0 206.0 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.775 4.54256449028 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76060309309 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59653134008 2.54303337028 102% => OK
Unique words: 130.0 127.690721649 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.65 0.622605031667 104% => OK
syllable_count: 289.8 290.88556701 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 4.0 0.824742268041 485% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 48.3646616433 44.8134815571 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.5 76.5299724578 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0 16.8248392259 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.6 4.34317383033 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.94845360825 152% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.268561232872 0.216113520407 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0767093117819 0.0766984524023 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.050286422758 0.0603063233224 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.134656155129 0.12726935374 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0408156700827 0.0580467560999 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 8.37731958763 133% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 70.7449484536 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.44 8.71597938144 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.79 7.59969072165 103% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 41.2886597938 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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