The chart below shows the value of one country’s exports in various categories during 2015 and 2016. The table shows the percentage change in each category of exports in 2016 compared with 2015.
The bar chart compares the value of five categories of export products from a certain country between 2015 until 2016 (measured in billion dollars) whilst the table illustrates the change of each category in percentage.
Overall only germs and jewelry that experienced a downward trend while others (petroleum products, engineered goods, agricultural products and textiles) witnessed a growth.
Petroleum and engineered products were the two most exported products. In 2015, the country earned over $60 billion from petroleum and slightly lower than $60 billion from engineered goods. Although the value of engineered products were smaller than that of petroleum, it increased significantly by 8.5% in the next year. Meanwhile, petroleum only rose by 3%. Therefore, the value of these two categories were almost the same in 2016.
Interestingly, despite textiles had the lowest value, below $30 billion in 2015, this type underwent the highest improvement by 15.24% in 12 months. Nevertheless, the earning from germs and jewelry declined by 5.18% in 2016. Finally, agricultural products, which stood at just over $30 billion in 2015, only rose by below 1% in 2016.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 131, Rule ID: NODT_DOZEN[1]
Message: Use simply: 'a billion'.
Suggestion: a billion
...try between 2015 until 2016 measured in billion dollars whilst the table illustrates th...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, if, nevertheless, therefore, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.0 43% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 33.7804878049 98% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 981.0 965.302439024 102% => OK
No of words: 181.0 196.424390244 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.41988950276 4.92477711251 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.66791821706 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87239689095 2.65546596893 108% => OK
Unique words: 103.0 106.607317073 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.569060773481 0.547539520022 104% => OK
syllable_count: 279.9 283.868780488 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 51.0959881008 43.030603864 119% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.1 112.824112599 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1 22.9334400587 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.3 5.23603664747 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.263026552942 0.215688989381 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.101151365387 0.103423049105 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.115834626179 0.0843802449381 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.171686106281 0.15604864568 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.15012961921 0.0819641961636 183% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.2329268293 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 61.2550243902 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.3012195122 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.86 11.4140731707 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.37 8.06136585366 104% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 40.7170731707 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 11.4329268293 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.