The chart below shows the places visited by different people living in Canada

Essay topics:

The chart below shows the places visited by different people living in Canada.

The bar graph elucidates the proportion of people from three myriad origins residing in Canada who visited four recreational sites.

Overall, it can be manifested that theatres are the least favourite place for all these groups. Whereas, the most preferred destination is cinema except for the non-English migrates who option for libraries instead.

First of all, cinemas are the most popular leisure-time activity for English speaking migrants with the figure of 65%, while the most prominent one for non-English speakers is libraries having figures of just over half of their population zoos are also famous in both these groups but the popularity is less which account to 50% for the formal migrants and 35% for the latter one. Notably, theatres are not visited much as they have the least figures 25% and 15% less for them.

Secondly, the places visited by the locals are almost having identical figures to that of the immigrants. Even Canadian preferred visiting cinemas the most with figures of almost three-quarters (70%). However, the least people tend to go for dramas (20%). Canadians are having an almost similar preference for library and zoo, which is accounting for 37% and 41% respectively.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, second, secondly, so, whereas, while, except for, first of all

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.0 157% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 5.60731707317 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 18.0 33.7804878049 53% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1016.0 965.302439024 105% => OK
No of words: 195.0 196.424390244 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.21025641026 4.92477711251 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.73687570622 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64738591869 2.65546596893 100% => OK
Unique words: 122.0 106.607317073 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.625641025641 0.547539520022 114% => OK
syllable_count: 307.8 283.868780488 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 3.36585365854 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 90.1921132026 43.030603864 210% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 112.888888889 112.824112599 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6666666667 22.9334400587 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.3333333333 5.23603664747 197% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0890483418917 0.215688989381 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0540558952653 0.103423049105 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.049954206797 0.0843802449381 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0715116546966 0.15604864568 46% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0513544011107 0.0819641961636 63% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.2329268293 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 61.2550243902 82% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.3012195122 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 11.4140731707 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.97 8.06136585366 111% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 40.7170731707 130% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 11.4329268293 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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