In many countries, insufficient respect is shown to older people.
What do you think may the reasons for this?
What problems might this cause in society?
It is undeniable that these days adequate respect is given to the elderly. The modern tech-savvy world has changed a lot compared to the past lifestyle as well as cultures. As a result, this might affect communities in various ways, which will discuss now.
On the one hand, it is apparent that in the modern era, everyone is dependent on technology and it has utterly revolutionized our lives. Nowadays, older people are not given much respect and care in several countries. Firstly, the prime reasons for this are the conflicting beliefs and viewpoints between them and the young, also the general decline in the amount of time available for family members to bond. Since the technology has developed to its peak, thus many teenagers or young adults consider the use of technological devices in top priority while the senior citizens are not aware and have no knowledge about these aspects. In addition, the relationship between family members is declining remarkably. That is to say, due to the fast-paced life of today's, people have no time to spend quality moments with elders, as each person is running towards the rat race to make money. Hence, the bond between family members is deteriorating day by day.
On the other hand, this has numerous other issues which affect societies as well. First and foremost, as people find it unnecessary to show proper respect to the elder people, the young will most likely disregard to respect others. As a consequence, they will fail to teach the next generation about mutual respect and family values. This may eventually lead to a rise in the number of selfish members who are incapable of building relationships, which can have a lasting impact on society as a whole. The world may become an unpleasant place to live. For instance, an article published by researchers in the UK stated that by 2050, the world would fulfill with almost seventy-five per cent of selfish people, compared with the current statistics.
In conclusion, I am convinced that the increasing irreverent attitude towards senior citizens is a serious issue, which can result in severe repercussions. Thus, it is vital that people actively take measures to eradicate this worrying situation as soon as possible.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, hence, if, may, so, thus, well, while, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, as a result, as well as, on the other hand, that is to say
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1868.0 1615.20841683 116% => OK
No of words: 371.0 315.596192385 118% => OK
Chars per words: 5.03504043127 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.38877662729 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75260097757 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 214.0 176.041082164 122% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.576819407008 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 589.5 506.74238477 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 8.0 2.52805611222 316% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.5434967303 49.4020404114 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.777777778 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6111111111 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.94444444444 7.06120827912 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.175933676644 0.244688304435 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0488629450565 0.084324248473 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.044223735884 0.0667982634062 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0950004685186 0.151304729494 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0292316962281 0.056905535591 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.95 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.88 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 100.0 78.4519038076 127% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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