people in many countries are spending less time with their families. what are the reasons, what are the effects of this trend?
A disturbing fact in modern society is that people have little to no time to spend with their families. It is widely believed that both the work pressure and poor understanding of family values are the primary reasons for this trend. Meanwhile, the negative impacts of it include bad relationships in their families and criminal behaviors to the society.
To begin with, work pressure is deemed as the most prominent reason for this phenomenon. This is because of the fast-paced corporate culture and competitive work atmosphere, individuals have to lean into work to have an opportunity for advancing on the ladder of success, resulting in the lack of time for their families and their children. Moreover, one fact that can explain the trend is the poor understanding of family values. The young, nowadays, prefer enjoying a range of outside activities with their friends to coming back home to get meaningful time with their beloved family members.
Given the above reasons, this trend might be trigger unfavorable effects on society as a whole and individuals in particular. Firstly, the most clearly seen impact is bad relationships. Due to the lack of time for family, people will find it hard to understand each other, leading to the lack of mutual understanding, sharing, sympathy, love, and so on. In addition, criminal behavior is also a serious consequence of this. For example, when parents do not spend much time with their children, they will lack appropriate parental care and attention and are likely to follow a path towards committing the crime.
To summarize, work pressure and poor understanding of family values are two factors leading to the fact that people hardly make time for their family. And this trend may contribute to not only bad relationships but criminal behaviors as well.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...onships but criminal behaviors as well.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, may, moreover, so, well, while, in addition, in particular, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1510.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 295.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.1186440678 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14434120667 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83770322784 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.538983050847 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 467.1 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.1346027121 49.4020404114 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.857142857 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0714285714 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.14285714286 7.06120827912 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.305129487024 0.244688304435 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.10500074126 0.084324248473 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0509451448312 0.0667982634062 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.204543866379 0.151304729494 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0461315921827 0.056905535591 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.59 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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