the chart below shows the percentage of households in owned and rented accommodation in England ans Wales between 1918 and 2011
The chart given illustrates the changes in the amount of owned and rented accommodation in England and Wales over the 93-year period from 1918 to 2011.
As can be seen from the chart, while the households in owned accommodation experienced a upward trend, the amount of rented accommodation decreased significantly over the period. Moreover, the year 1918 witnessed the most households rented and the least housesholds in owned. However, it was the 2001 that saw the largest proportion of households rented and the smallest proportion of households in.
In particular, the ratio of accommodation in owned experienced a steady increase over the period, except for the 10-year time from 2001 to 2011, which witnessed a moderate drop from nearly 70% to 64 %. The percentage of people owning a house soared from 24% to nearly 70%, 3 times fold between 1918 and 2001. In contrast, the percentage of residents renting a house plunged from 78% to just over 30% over the period from 1918 to 2001. And finally, it had a insignificant increase of 3⁰% in the end of the period, from 2001 to 2011.
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finally, however, if, moreover, so, while, except for, in contrast, in particular
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.0 29% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 33.7804878049 118% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 907.0 965.302439024 94% => OK
No of words: 184.0 196.424390244 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.92934782609 4.92477711251 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.68302321012 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88602081475 2.65546596893 109% => OK
Unique words: 93.0 106.607317073 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.505434782609 0.547539520022 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 256.5 283.868780488 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.1169973835 43.030603864 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.375 112.824112599 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0 22.9334400587 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.125 5.23603664747 193% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 1.69756097561 295% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.316916180087 0.215688989381 147% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.154016790949 0.103423049105 149% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0899348990257 0.0843802449381 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.25740181875 0.15604864568 165% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0823862775337 0.0819641961636 101% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.2329268293 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.05 61.2550243902 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.3012195122 96% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.61 11.4140731707 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.95 8.06136585366 99% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 40.7170731707 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 11.4329268293 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.