Some people believe that nowadays we have too many choices. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement
Some people would argue that in the today's world people have too many choices to make in life. To a great extent, I am diametrically opposed with this statement and this essay will show my personal view.
On the one hand, some people do not even have a chance in their life to choose. Since some have strict, narrow-minded and conservative parents, they do not even have the right to speak themself let alone making a choice. Take my cousin as an typical example, she has had a dream of becoming a singer, a songwriter, an artist since she was a little and the genuinely wanted to follow her dream after graduating from high school. Despite knowing her talent and dream, her parents made her to enter university and become a doctor simply because they wanted her to follow their footsteps as well as family's tradition.
On the other hand, since the world is becoming more and more modern and advanced, people has a milliard of things to try and chose. However, it is the people' rights to decide how they are going to live their lives. Moreover, making too much choices does not mean you breaking the or committing a crime. One thing is considered as "socially unacceptable" only when it affects other people or violates the law.
In a nutshell, having too much choices is not a bad thing, sometimes, we have to appreciate it. As long as it does not affect others or violate the law, it is people' free rights to have choices in life.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: a
...lone making a choice. Take my cousin as an typical example, she has had a dream of...
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Suggestion: try to
...ced, people has a milliard of things to try and chose. However, it is the people rights...
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Message: Use 'many' with countable nouns.
Suggestion: many
... live their lives. Moreover, making too much choices does not mean you breaking the ...
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Message: Use 'many' with countable nouns.
Suggestion: many
... the law. In a nutshell, having too much choices is not a bad thing, sometimes, ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, moreover, so, well, as well as, on the other hand, to a great extent
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1195.0 1615.20841683 74% => OK
No of words: 259.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.6138996139 5.12529762239 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01166760082 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59329577714 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.571428571429 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 376.2 506.74238477 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.7405902554 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.5833333333 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5833333333 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.75 7.06120827912 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.276374152663 0.244688304435 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.105877886043 0.084324248473 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0844178969441 0.0667982634062 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.185473532057 0.151304729494 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.101967604664 0.056905535591 179% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 13.0946893788 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.46 12.4159519038 76% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.54 8.58950901804 88% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 78.4519038076 60% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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