Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? It is better to use printed materials such as books and articles to do research than it is to use the internet. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Everyone has to study in order to gain knowledge and experience. Choosing the sources to learn is greatly important since it affect time and accuracy. Some people choose to use traditional materials such as books and notes to do research rather than the Internet. However, i totally disagree with this statement because of the convenience and ease.
First and foremost, with Internet, many people found that they can do research in everywhere they at. The only requirement is having a device which is connected to the Internet. For example, when studying mathematics, students can do research of formulas or methods on the Internet since almost every knowledge in our lives is uploaded there. In addition, nowadays, many books are transformed to e-book which can easily found on the Internet for free. E-book is the book which is taken from the traditional one and public on the Internet. Students can search for it with just a mobile device. Indeed, it is more convenience when researching for materials on the Internet.
Secondly, people can feel that finding information on the Internet is easier than doing it on traditional materials. They just have to type what they need and let the computers do its’ job. After all, students only have to find which source is suitable for them. For instance, when pupils search for the most popular pictures of some famous artist, they only have to search for the artist name and the answer will show up. Moreover, when finding information in books or article, students have to look for the books at first and then seek for information. Doing this take much time which you can save it when searching on the Internet. Therefore, do research on the Internet is greatly easier than on books.
In conclusion, people should search for information on the Internet because of the convenience and ease.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, look, moreover, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, after all, as to, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 43.0788530466 44% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 52.1666666667 79% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.0752688172 149% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1538.0 1977.66487455 78% => OK
No of words: 309.0 407.700716846 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.97734627832 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1926597562 4.48103885553 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6401380978 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 212.727598566 71% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.488673139159 0.524837075471 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 470.7 618.680645161 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.62984944 48.9658058833 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.9473684211 100.406767564 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.2631578947 20.6045352989 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.94736842105 5.45110844103 146% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.88709677419 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.224354840916 0.236089414692 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.080885787742 0.076458572812 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0808990991333 0.0737576698707 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.141167929522 0.150856017488 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0794621475793 0.0645574589148 123% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 11.7677419355 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 58.1214874552 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.1575268817 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.31 10.9000537634 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.6 8.01818996416 95% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 86.8835125448 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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