Why are people living longer?
That people nowadays are living longer compared to people who lived in the past is a trustworthy and reasonable fact. Because of the extended human lifetime, we can see an explosive trend in the population of the world these days. In the following paragraphs, I will elaborate on some reasons that I think are more responsible for the increase in the lifetime of modern-day humans.
The first reason and maybe the most important one is that alongside the recent developments in industry, agriculture, housing, and other aspects of human civilization, a myriad of significant improvements has occurred in the health sector. Recent findings in sciences and techniques related to health services have allowed doctors to successfully deal with serious diseases and illnesses which were the main causes of death in the past. Scientists have managed to find intelligent solutions for complicated treatments and give people suffering from dangerous diseases like cancers, heart problems, and diabetes while researching methods to efficiently vaccinate children against a variety of widespread viruses, which could turn an energetic city into a cemetery just a few centuries ago. In addition, recent achievements in the design of equipped cleanrooms have led to more successful operations in hospitals. On the other hand, over the last few decades, many researchers have worked remarkably on curing patients using artificial intelligence, which seems like a real revolution in health care.
Another reason is that by the formation of official diplomatic relationships between governments as a result of modernization, governments now strive to solve the conflicts using more peaceful ways instead of fighting wars, which might contribute to a sudden decline in the population in the past centuries. Consequently, nowadays, fewer military and ordinary people are killed in war fields. If the governments succeed to maintain peace throughout the world, the fights, which concern a lot of people, will be avoided. For example, during World Wars I and II, thousands of people were killed in Europe. However, European governments since then have learned a lot from those events and tried to avoid them.
Lastly, people now can easily keep a balance between their work and life. Nevertheless, there were not a lot of entertainment facilities and chances to travel around the world in the past. People could not relieve pressures and stresses easily and had not many opportunities to relax while suffering from poor working conditions. The inconvenient lifestyle of people and possible threats during work might cause untimely death. People had to work hard and save their needs for the times when there were severe weather conditions.
To sum up, based on the aforementioned arguments, there are a myriad of reasons that explain why humans are living longer than before. Some of the reasons, such as the recent improvements in health care and treatments, attempts of governments to avoid conflicts, keeping a balance between work and life, and better work conditions, are mentioned above. However, that was like a story in a nutshell. Actually, there are some other reasons which are mentioned above.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: myriads
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Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: Some
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, consequently, first, however, if, lastly, may, nevertheless, so, then, while, for example, i think, in addition, such as, as a result, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 13.8261648746 137% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.0286738351 127% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 43.0788530466 35% => OK
Preposition: 84.0 52.1666666667 161% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.0752688172 136% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2691.0 1977.66487455 136% => OK
No of words: 502.0 407.700716846 123% => OK
Chars per words: 5.36055776892 4.8611393121 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.7334296765 4.48103885553 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94935707628 2.67179642975 110% => OK
Unique words: 279.0 212.727598566 131% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.55577689243 0.524837075471 106% => OK
syllable_count: 838.8 618.680645161 136% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 75.7017991642 48.9658058833 155% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.318181818 100.406767564 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.8181818182 20.6045352989 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.09090909091 5.45110844103 148% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.85842293907 233% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.198721795224 0.236089414692 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0575794734333 0.076458572812 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.109063135516 0.0737576698707 148% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.112320910493 0.150856017488 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0767877527566 0.0645574589148 119% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 11.7677419355 129% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 58.1214874552 70% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 10.1575268817 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.1 10.9000537634 129% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.51 8.01818996416 119% => OK
difficult_words: 152.0 86.8835125448 175% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 10.002688172 150% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.247311828 146% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 90.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 27.0 Out of 30
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