In some developed countries, people become fat because they eat too much junk food. Suggest some ways that governments and food companies can encourage people to stay fit and eat a healthy diet.
In many developed countries, overweight is a common problem for the majority of people as they have consumed too much unhealthy food. Obesity can cause many diseases such as heart disease or diabetes, which is being suffered by more and more people. This essay will provide some suggestions for the governments and food companies to get more people to stay on a healthy diet.
First of all, the governments should penalize the companies which are selling fast foods. In America, there are many junk food companies like McDonald's and KFC, which attract a huge amount of customers. There should be a tax on the fast-food business to increase the value of junk food. If the price of these rises, there should be fewer people who want to have their lunch and dinner in these restaurants.
Moreover, food companies can include healthy meals like fruits and vegetables in the menu for their customers instead of fried chicken nuggets. They can replace their hamburgers, French fries, or coke with healthy salad and fruit juices. Since the price of junk food is usually much cheaper whereas quality and healthy meals are more expensive, customers tend to prefer unhealthy food to healthy ones. If there are more hale products and their price is cheaper, we should have more people to spend money on these instead of junk food.
Therefore, to encourage more people to have a healthy diet, we should increase the tax on fast food and add more healthy products to the daily meals.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 112, Rule ID: MANY_NN_U[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun junk seems to be uncountable; consider using: 'much junk', 'a good deal of junk'.
Suggestion: much junk; a good deal of junk
...lling fast foods. In America, there are many junk food companies like McDonalds and KFC, ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, moreover, so, therefore, whereas, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 8.3376753507 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1223.0 1615.20841683 76% => OK
No of words: 251.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.87250996016 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98032404683 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.39042496676 2.80592935109 85% => OK
Unique words: 129.0 176.041082164 73% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.513944223108 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 372.6 506.74238477 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 23.6020243953 49.4020404114 48% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 101.916666667 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.9166666667 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.5 7.06120827912 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.3265706901 0.244688304435 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.130266343358 0.084324248473 154% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0848296780128 0.0667982634062 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.206475970355 0.151304729494 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0568048820073 0.056905535591 100% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.97 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.84 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 78.4519038076 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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