Films and computer games containing violence is popular these days. Many people believe that this should be banned while others believe that they are just for refreshment. Discuss both the views and give your opinion.
Today's genration is attracted by the voilence types of games and films .if it is having some bad face and good one also . The hype and crazyness in the world especially in the youth is at its peak . like we are having a example of india the people were so crazy that the govermnent have to ban such games and most of the movies which are not good for there mind. For example :- PUBG , Fortnite and many other battle royal games.
Let's talk about multiple advantages such as :- Now a days there are many esports tournaments organinsed by companies that has a price pool , it also develops the mind skills in kids, it moreover it reduces the stress.
some disadvantages like :- the impration on young one's is not good they always thinks about that and this can lead to mental probelms,the kids are not listing to there parents while playing the computer games.
it seemes like that if the youngsters are spending more and more time watching films and playing curel games it will definately react on there mind but on the other side it is good for person who are in tension .
Denpending upon me i belive so we should play games and watch movies in a limit. we should not spend most of the time doing all this .These all are part of our live we should enjoy this but thee excess of eveything is harmful.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, moreover, so, while, for example, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 41.998997996 62% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1059.0 1615.20841683 66% => OK
No of words: 238.0 315.596192385 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.44957983193 5.12529762239 87% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.92775363542 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.25665414654 2.80592935109 80% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.59243697479 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 330.3 506.74238477 65% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 58.0825296188 49.4020404114 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.666666667 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.4444444444 20.7667163134 127% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.22222222222 7.06120827912 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 32.0 5.01903807615 638% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.177420644294 0.244688304435 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0658879649582 0.084324248473 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0306862101075 0.0667982634062 46% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0839300038363 0.151304729494 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0256168233756 0.056905535591 45% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.01 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.83 12.4159519038 71% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.78 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 78.4519038076 55% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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