The growth of online shopping will one day lead to all shops in towns and cities closing. Do you agree or disagree?
Indubitably, online shopping has become more attractive to shopaholics because of the advent of the technological world. It is often argued that the shops in towns and cities will lead to a decline because of the ongoing trend of online shopping. And, I partially accord with this kind of notion.
Apparently, the widespread use of e-commerce platforms for shopping is accelerating dramatically and has many reasons to substantiate it. The first prominent reason is that cutting-edge technology offers a better lifestyle in an unprecedented fashion. In simple words, people can buy anything they need around the clock with the touch of a button and the product will be delivered to their desired location such as homes. Apart from this, online shopping provides a numerous range of options while selecting an item or a product. For instance, buying a phone on an Amazon or a Flipkart, one can get ample amount of options by checking with multiple factors such as brands, price range, model no, device type, and many others. These facilities will definitely force many businesses to go online and many to close.
On the contrary, there will be still demand for shopping malls, complexes, and street stores in the future. This is because a certain number of shoppers still want a more tactile shopping experience. In other words, consumers still want to see, touch, and feel products before purchasing. This way, not only they do get tangible experience, but also take products home instantaneously after buying it. For example, there are people who want to buy fruits and vegetables from the market by checking the freshness of material rather than ordering it online from shopping websites which cannot provide the assurance of freshness and quality of a product.
In conclusion, physical shops business may have reduced due to the advent of online shopping but, it has never close or obsolete from the modern life because there are some products in the market which sells only because of it freshness and quality.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Consider replacing "in an unprecedented fashion" with adverb for "unprecedented"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, apparently, but, first, if, may, so, still, while, apart from, for example, for instance, in conclusion, kind of, such as, in other words, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1698.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 332.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.11445783133 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.2685907696 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73354616583 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.581325301205 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 531.9 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.3014110737 49.4020404114 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.2 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.1333333333 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.6666666667 7.06120827912 151% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.236999982725 0.244688304435 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.080280916348 0.084324248473 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0761255796878 0.0667982634062 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.156246075447 0.151304729494 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0535157286857 0.056905535591 94% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.68 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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