Dear Elijah,
I am writing this letter to request you to provide me with your assistance to set up the necessary equipment for my presentation in front of my clients and group manager.
The presentation will take place tomorrow at 5 PM in the conference hall room and it is about the New Strategic Planning to acquire a business in IT infrastructure services. The presentation will talk about the latest techniques used in the IT industry to practice which will reduce the cost of investment and huge profits for the next half-decade.
Moreover, I have arranged tea, coffee, and snacks for our audiences after the presentation for small talks and discussion about the new strategies planning to capture business by getting new clients. Besides, there will be a list of questions I have prepared to get feedback from my presentation which will decide the next step for our firm.
Since my presentation will be the next day, I would request to set up the following hardware which is a mike, speakers, and a projector. Please ensure that the mike should be wireless as I'll be moving around the stage during my presentation and wired mike will not allow many movements and could cause trouble with sound during the presentation. Apart from this, please make sure the sitting arrangement is row-wise, and not in the form of groups around the tables.
I hope this will not be any trouble for you and you will be able to set it all up in no time as you are an expert at it.
Yours faithfully,
Shwatank Bhasin
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 238, Rule ID: DT_PRP[1]
Message: Possible typo. Did you mean 'the' or 'IT'?
Suggestion: the; IT
...alk about the latest techniques used in the IT industry to practice which will reduce ...
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Line 9, column 188, Rule ID: ILL_I_LL[1]
Message: Did you mean 'I'll'?
Suggestion: I'll
...ure that the mike should be wireless as Ill be moving around the stage during my pr...
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, moreover, so, apart from
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 4.92783505155 244% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 10.0 5.05154639175 198% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 32.9175257732 85% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 26.3917525773 140% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 3.85567010309 337% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1260.0 937.175257732 134% => OK
No of words: 264.0 206.0 128% => OK
Chars per words: 4.77272727273 4.54256449028 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03089032464 3.78020617076 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77479637983 2.54303337028 109% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 127.690721649 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.560606060606 0.622605031667 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 381.6 290.88556701 131% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.463917525773 647% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 16.3608247423 159% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 48.733971724 44.8134815571 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.0 76.5299724578 165% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.4 16.8248392259 157% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.3 4.34317383033 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.291462366484 0.216113520407 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.114243046818 0.0766984524023 149% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0721223735988 0.0603063233224 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.160039821289 0.12726935374 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0780178432944 0.0580467560999 134% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 8.37731958763 170% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.01 70.7449484536 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 7.45979381443 149% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.68 8.71597938144 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.8 7.59969072165 103% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 41.2886597938 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 8.62886597938 162% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 8.54432989691 145% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 8.15463917526 172% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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