There are many different types of music in the world today. Why do we need music? Is the traditional music of a country more important than the international music that is heard everywhere nowadays?
Various music genres can indeed be found all over the world. There are many reasons why music plays a vital role in our life, and I argue that traditional music is more important than the international music that is very popular.
Music is an essential part of all human cultures for a variety of reasons. Firstly, music is the universal language, so we do not even need words to understand what music is saying. For example, in big music festivals or concerts such as Coachella, Tomorrowland, a lot of people from many different countries attend. When music is being played, everyone starts dancing to it. Furthermore, music also creates a connection between participants regardless of their age, race, and gender. Secondly, music is good for memory. Clearly, we could remember the lyrics of a bunch of songs much better than an article we recently read. For instance, in nursing homes, they started using musical therapy to let the elderly remember their past.
In my opinion, the importance of traditional music of a country outweighs that of international music that has been heard in every part of the world. Traditional music represents the culture, customs, and history of a country. Traditional music helps us understand better the people of our country. For example, Vietnamese folk music is very diverse, and it could express the spiritual-cultural activities of country people. By contrast, international music is often catchy, fun attracts the young. If young people continued ignoring traditional music, it would gradually disappear.
In conclusion, music makes a significant contribution to human existence, and I believe that traditional music should be valuable than international music.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 285, Rule ID: NUMEROUS_DIFFERENT[1]
Message: Use simply 'many'.
Suggestion: many
...lla, Tomorrowland, a lot of people from many different countries attend. When music is being p...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, second, secondly, so, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1443.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 272.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.30514705882 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06108636974 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00825843911 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.602941176471 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 446.4 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 0.809619238477 618% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.5102251403 49.4020404114 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.8823529412 106.682146367 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0 20.7667163134 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.64705882353 7.06120827912 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.611926221018 0.244688304435 250% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.213338275791 0.084324248473 253% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.117104191308 0.0667982634062 175% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.417850327746 0.151304729494 276% => Maybe some contents are duplicated.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0430837866243 0.056905535591 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.22 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.61 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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