You recently did a short cookery course. The cookery school has asked for your feedback on this course. Write a letter to the course director at the cookery school. In your letter,
describe what you enjoyed about the course
say how much cooking you’ve done since the course
suggest another cookery course you’d like the school to offer
Dear Sir,
Recently, I have completed cooking classes at your cookery school. And, I am writing this letter to share my feedback on your cooking sessions.
I enjoyed every session of cooking classes whether it was Continental, Chinese, Japanese, French, and German. All these different types of cuisines learning at your school were most of the amazing times I had. Apart from this, I made some friends in the cooking classes who were also taking sessions from your cookery school.
I have been preparing all home-cooked meals since I have completed the course and it's been two weeks. My dishes have become more delicious as I got praises from my flatmates. I was extremely delighted that learning at your cookery school did improve my cooking skills.
I was hoping to learn about more sea-food cuisines and I saw the advertisement in the magazine that your school is going to open classes on preparing sea-food dishes. But, I did not get any update on your website portal for registration. I would like you to offer this course at your school because it will be great to cook seafood in winters and it will be best to learn the course this time as winter is coming back in the next two months. At last, I want to say that your school is one of the best cooking schools in the town where people can come become MasterChef at their homes to make mouth-watering meals.
I am hoping for a prompt response to this letter.
Yours faithfully,
Shwatank Bhasin
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, apart from
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.48453608247 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 44.0 32.9175257732 134% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 33.0 26.3917525773 125% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1225.0 937.175257732 131% => OK
No of words: 256.0 206.0 124% => OK
Chars per words: 4.78515625 4.54256449028 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0 3.78020617076 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52182550583 2.54303337028 99% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 127.690721649 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.56640625 0.622605031667 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 361.8 290.88556701 124% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.13402061856 142% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.2317255678 44.8134815571 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.5 76.5299724578 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2857142857 16.8248392259 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.07142857143 4.34317383033 48% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 7.41237113402 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.366889008757 0.216113520407 170% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.118439071725 0.0766984524023 154% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0685048510784 0.0603063233224 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.1945452844 0.12726935374 153% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0712819543836 0.0580467560999 123% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 8.37731958763 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 70.7449484536 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 7.45979381443 106% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.5 8.71597938144 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.37 7.59969072165 97% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 41.2886597938 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.