It is a natural process for animal species to become extinct (e.g. dinosaur, dodo…) There is no reason why people should try to prevent this from happening. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
There is a belief that every form of life has their begins and their ends that has led to the agreement of the natural extinction of the animals. Furthermore, this results in the ignorance of the life threatening of others species. Personally, I root against this conception.
Except the dinosaur, for millenniums, the circle of wild life was just basically around the life maintenance which based on the key balance of every group. However, since the first footstep of the humankind, the balance has been sabotaged gradually. Let’s take the tragic history of the dodo birds for example. It was around the 17th or 18th century, that unique birds had been peacefully locating in a sole island. However, since the first ships found out that place, the birds had turned out to be substitution for their meat during the cruise. The approach of the ships also resulted in the sneak in of rats which then were known to consume the birds’ eggs. After all, in an unconscious way, our ancestors had unnaturally forced the extinction of the birds and the others creatures as a whole. Therefore, we must prevent the unnatural extinction to the other creatures and let everything be like how it functions.
Secondly, the chain food of the nature is a considerable factor to the existence of every form of life. Since a long time, the “natural extinction” term has not been realistic in the era of the dominance of human beings. The overconsumption of meat and the unstoppable rising demands for the variety of foods have been producing the deteriorating outcomes to the balance of the food chain in individual and the whole ecology as a whole. The predators need adequate meat to sustain their well-being, the marine life requires sufficient natural supplies for their meals but the current overpopulation has led to the unbreakable barrier in their path to their food. Hence, undeniably, the humankind has to have a serious look at their acts and their responsibility to reverse and overcome the consequences happening to the extinction of animals.
In conclusion, obviously, every life has their begin and their end, the best way we can support is just to let everything be like it instinctively is.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, hence, however, if, look, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, well, after all, as to, for example, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 58.0 41.998997996 138% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1835.0 1615.20841683 114% => OK
No of words: 370.0 315.596192385 117% => OK
Chars per words: 4.95945945946 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.38581623665 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88486770075 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 176.041082164 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.518918918919 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 567.9 506.74238477 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 11.0 2.52805611222 435% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.8437733359 49.4020404114 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.941176471 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.7647058824 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.58823529412 7.06120827912 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0932994296535 0.244688304435 38% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0336094912054 0.084324248473 40% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0233411473895 0.0667982634062 35% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0536988494606 0.151304729494 35% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0312683002031 0.056905535591 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.69 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 78.4519038076 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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