Task 1: Department Stores and Online Stores in Australia
The table gives information about department and online stores in Australia in 2011.
Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
Department Stores Online Stores
Number of Businesses 67 368
Profit (million AUD) 807 863
Sales Revenue (million AUD) 12,700 13,400
Growth .4% .6%
The table makes comparison between two main types of Australian business in 2011: Department and online stores.
Overall, although the online businesses’ operation overweighed the department businesses one, the gap between their profits, incomes and growth rate was explicitly unremarkable.
In 2011, while the number of department stores only reached 67 in total, the one in online retail was nearly 6 times higher. However, the huge digital operation did not make any distinctive progress comparing to the conventional one in its profit gains. With 863 figures in AUD, it was only 56 million dollars higher than the 67-store method. The two sectors left also proved the inconsiderable difference between the two businesses. After one year, both of the sales incomes in both types of retail were respectively around 13,000 million Australian dollars. Last but not least, the growth rate which showed the efficiency of a pattern of retail, this time proved how efficient online stores were when being put on the other side of the scale with department stores. With 6 percent in growing, the percentage was only 2 percent higher than the small operation.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 33.7804878049 74% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.97073170732 201% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 975.0 965.302439024 101% => OK
No of words: 185.0 196.424390244 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.27027027027 4.92477711251 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.68801715136 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76223091891 2.65546596893 104% => OK
Unique words: 116.0 106.607317073 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.627027027027 0.547539520022 115% => OK
syllable_count: 298.8 283.868780488 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.614268456 43.030603864 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.333333333 112.824112599 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5555555556 22.9334400587 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.66666666667 5.23603664747 70% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.19083189082 0.215688989381 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0818477366635 0.103423049105 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0869144996276 0.0843802449381 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.154989165634 0.15604864568 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0744669376725 0.0819641961636 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.2329268293 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 61.2550243902 84% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.3012195122 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.29 11.4140731707 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.15 8.06136585366 114% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 40.7170731707 130% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 11.4329268293 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.