The graph below shows the average number of UK commuters travelling each day by car bus or train between 1970 and 2030

Essay topics:

The graph below shows the average number of UK commuters travelling each day by car, bus or train between 1970 and 2030.

The given line graph illustrates how many UK people using car, bus or train to travel every day in a 60-year period from 1970 to 2030.
It is clear that car is the main mean of transportation all over the time period. Overall, there is an upward trend in the number of commuters in car and train while bus witnesses a decrease in utilisation.

In the initial year, the major transport station was car with more than five millions usages there was over two millions people using train to transport compared to four millions commuters of train.

In 2020, train was seen a significant growth to over seven millions users. Similarly, the number of commuters travelling by train went up sharply by about three millions. In contrast, there was a gradual decrease in bus trvellers, at just over three millions. In the next ten years, these trends are expected to remain. Car commuters will hit the highest point at nearly nine millions, at the same time, train is considered the number of over five millions users while bus will continue to fall to nearly three millions trvellers.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 77, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'traveling', 'travelling'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'train' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: traveling; travelling
... many UK people using car, bus or train to travel every day in a 60-year period from 1970...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 141, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'transporting'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'train' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: transporting
...as over two millions people using train to transport compared to four millions commuters of ...
^^^^^^^^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, similarly, while, in contrast

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 6.8 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 33.7804878049 107% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 895.0 965.302439024 93% => OK
No of words: 187.0 196.424390244 95% => OK
Chars per words: 4.78609625668 4.92477711251 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.69794460899 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51905148948 2.65546596893 95% => OK
Unique words: 108.0 106.607317073 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.577540106952 0.547539520022 105% => OK
syllable_count: 262.8 283.868780488 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.9584677173 43.030603864 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.4444444444 112.824112599 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7777777778 22.9334400587 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.66666666667 5.23603664747 70% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.279297338053 0.215688989381 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.117082765265 0.103423049105 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0997275536843 0.0843802449381 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.18823252702 0.15604864568 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0882407982238 0.0819641961636 108% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.2329268293 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 61.2550243902 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.3012195122 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.5 11.4140731707 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.41 8.06136585366 92% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 40.7170731707 81% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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