some people say that parents should places restricTIons on the hours their children spend watching TV and playing computer games, and encourage them to spend this time reading books instead. Do you agree or disagree?
It is undeniable fact that children are policy maker of tomorrow.It is often argued that parents should implement restriction on watching Tv and playing computer games,and encourage children to read book. However, I think in reverse maner and disagree with given notion therefore, my inclination would be justified in ensuring paragraphs.
To commence with, Tv shows and computer games are just refreshment activity for them.Already they do too much study and have to finish homework whereas, by playing computer games they can took break from hectic schedule and study burden. Secondly, by playing such mind games in computer they can augment their grasping power. Moreover, multiplayer games can teach them competition even children can take quick decision.Furthermore, Tv show also provide visiual knowledge to them although TV shows such as discovery, net-giography, KBC this show provide wide range of knowledge.Additionally, children can enjoy documentary, news, shows based on history,science and sports this will help them to learn about life of past, fact of science this will be more helpful and also can light-up their mood.
Conversly, section of society support that parents should encourage children for reading book for myrid reasons.First and foremost, reading can develops imagination power them, will also help to improve reading skill, language command. Besides this, books have abundant knowledge as many books are based on realistic life story, some based on researches, discoveries due to this children can gain knowledge of any particular filed.
To recapitulate, computer games and Tv shows are only fun activity for youngesters so parents can not put restriction but just can suggest to read book.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, furthermore, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, whereas, i think, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 7.85571142285 204% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1467.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 265.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.5358490566 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03470204552 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.12278686317 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.603773584906 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 432.9 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0721442886 50% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 33.0 20.2975951904 163% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 107.813496372 49.4020404114 218% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 183.375 106.682146367 172% => OK
Words per sentence: 33.125 20.7667163134 160% => OK
Discourse Markers: 15.125 7.06120827912 214% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.295763775977 0.244688304435 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.138530470329 0.084324248473 164% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0691652715009 0.0667982634062 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.188151110345 0.151304729494 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0269344594957 0.056905535591 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 21.2 13.0946893788 162% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.98 50.2224549098 76% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.2 11.3001002004 143% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.44 12.4159519038 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.56 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.2 10.1190380762 150% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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