The charts below show the results of a survey (the outcome of a survey) about what people of different age groups say makes them most happy. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The given pie charts illustrate a population make-up of a survey about factors contributing to a happy life from the different aged groups.
Overall, the achievement at work sector has the highest proportion of happiness in the both age groups. Besides, people who under 30 feel happy if they can travel and have a good appearance while people who over 30 tend to satisfy with their life when they have financial security and gather with family.
Look at the similarities, for both young and older people says that achievement at work brings them most happiness: 31% for the former group anf 32% for latter group. Doing hobbies is also a noticeble factor triggering feeling for both age groups mentioned with 22% and 24% respectively.
Turning now to the differences, many younger people regard having a good appearance as extremely important: 18% of them states this brings them most happiness. This is followed by 15% who states that travel brings them happiness. Neither of these two factors is mentioned by older people. Instead, 20% of older people reports that having financial security is most important to their happiness and 14% says they feel most happy when they are with their family.
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...ncial security and gather with family. Look at the similarities, for both young...
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... at work brings them most happiness: 31% for the former group anf 32% for latter ...
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...ntioned with 22% and 24% respectively. Turning now to the differences, many you...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, if, look, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 3.15609756098 253% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 17.0 5.60731707317 303% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 24.0 33.7804878049 71% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1002.0 965.302439024 104% => OK
No of words: 200.0 196.424390244 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.01 4.92477711251 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76060309309 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59405088616 2.65546596893 98% => OK
Unique words: 115.0 106.607317073 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.575 0.547539520022 105% => OK
syllable_count: 293.4 283.868780488 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 3.36585365854 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.4331689353 43.030603864 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.333333333 112.824112599 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.2222222222 22.9334400587 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.33333333333 5.23603664747 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 1.69756097561 295% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 3.70975609756 216% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.204016969227 0.215688989381 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0818003177234 0.103423049105 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0681015481358 0.0843802449381 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.1343186442 0.15604864568 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0677530938065 0.0819641961636 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.2329268293 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 61.2550243902 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.3012195122 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 11.4140731707 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.12 8.06136585366 101% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 40.7170731707 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.4329268293 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.