You should spend about **40 minutes** on this task.
Write about the following topic.
***Some people prefer to spend their lives doing the same things and avoiding change. Others, however, think that change is always a good thing.***
***Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.***
***Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.***
You should write **at least 250 words.**
In this day and age, there is a contentious problem about the way human decide their life paths. Some people have standpoints that human should live in a sedentary lifestyle, while others think that we should experiences changes in our lives. This essay will elucidate these two perspectives in an objective view and also give cogent instances in this society.
In the first opinion, people believe doing the same things in lives is a good idea because they think changes are adventures. It is not abstruse that humans nowadays are under pressure by works and studying, by that reason, they are potentially confused dangerous modification. Some of them are likely to shirk doing new things in the thought of failing. Moreover, some teenagers are affected by their parents because they are loath to study traditional career. That phenomenon triggers the fear of people in changing their lifestyle. To be more specific, in real life there are many adults do not want to investigate different kinds of jobs because they are afraid that they do not have enough possibility to achieve success. So, in this society there are plenty of people prefer doing the safe jobs such as officers to trying new jobs.
In the other hand, some people have different points of view because they do not want to waste their lives. People with optimistic view will enjoy itinerant lifestyle, they also prefer exploring new jobs. It can be explained that this kind of people enjoy their lives with intriguing experiences, also, they do not want to learn things parrot-fashion through theories. They want to find the true reason to exist and search for their aims in lives. This can be exemplified by people who get rid of safe jobs to adventure their dreams. Such as some Youtubers, they know exactly this job is a hazard but they still try hard to prove that their endeavor are not futile.
To sum up, I believe that all opinions are appropriate with concrete kinds of people. Depends on personalities, people can easily decide their lifestyles without being afraid of prejudices. In my viewpoint, I approve of changing new things because in some days in future, we will regret if we just stay steadily in safe zones.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 210, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[2]
Message: The verb 'should' requires the base form of the verb: 'experience'
Suggestion: experience
...tyle, while others think that we should experiences changes in our lives. This essay will e...
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Line 4, column 262, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
...hanging new things because in some days in future, we will regret if we just stay steadil...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, moreover, so, still, while, kind of, such as, in my view, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 47.0 24.0651302605 195% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 54.0 41.998997996 129% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1824.0 1615.20841683 113% => OK
No of words: 374.0 315.596192385 119% => OK
Chars per words: 4.87700534759 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3976220399 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57027956483 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.524064171123 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 570.6 506.74238477 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 5.43587174349 239% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.3254739559 49.4020404114 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.0 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6842105263 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.68421052632 7.06120827912 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.26315550652 0.244688304435 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0880040668706 0.084324248473 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0614654429102 0.0667982634062 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.167841700871 0.151304729494 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0532410228272 0.056905535591 94% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.0946893788 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.02 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.96 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.