Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? It is better to use printed materials such as books and articles to do research than it is to use the internet. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Many people think that paper-based and printed resources are superior to online and internet-based resources. They believe that printed materials are more reliable and trustworthy than their online counterparts. I disagree with them and I would prefer the internet-based resources. In this essay, I am going to explain my reasons in detail.
First of all, insisting on using paper-based materials means to remove more trees from planet Earth. We all know that we live in a planet, which is at stake. Our planet Earth encounters many threats, such as global warming, desertification and deforestation, just to name a few. The source of these threats is humans. Therefore, it is our duty, as an individual, to protect our planet from these threats. One method of protecting the Earth is by keeping and preserving the trees. We know that all the papers that we use daily come from these valuable trees. Consequently, we should decline using papers, which can be done effectively by using online resources rather than paper-based ones.
In addition, the internet is limitless like an ocean without boundaries. This will help that people can find answer for their any question. The printed resources are limited and restricted, thus we may not find any solution or answer for our problems. Even if we can find our answers it will need a lot of effort and time, since we should go to libraries to find the suitable resources and then search in them for our answers. Nonetheless, for online resources you sit in front of the computer, type your question and then just a click, magically you will be connected to the numerous digital libraries all around the world. Thus, you not only have access to the resources, but also you can search effectively and quickly to find the best answer to your question, e.g., by title, by author, by abstract, by subject, to name a few.
To conclude, although many people agree with using printed materials, I concur with utilizing the online resources. This is because they are environmental-friendly and unlimited. I strongly believe that online and paper-free resources in the long run will decline the disastrous effects caused by climate changes, while they can assist humans to be more successful and prosperous in their quest.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, e.g., first, if, may, nonetheless, so, then, therefore, thus, while, in addition, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 9.8082437276 143% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 49.0 43.0788530466 114% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 52.1666666667 86% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1890.0 1977.66487455 96% => OK
No of words: 376.0 407.700716846 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.02659574468 4.8611393121 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40348946061 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91911772671 2.67179642975 109% => OK
Unique words: 197.0 212.727598566 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.523936170213 0.524837075471 100% => OK
syllable_count: 576.0 618.680645161 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.59856630824 135% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.94265232975 202% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 50.4981084489 48.9658058833 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.0 100.406767564 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.9047619048 20.6045352989 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.09523809524 5.45110844103 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.16947519132 0.236089414692 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0509278085351 0.076458572812 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.051819058677 0.0737576698707 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.101023885864 0.150856017488 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0158150748094 0.0645574589148 24% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 11.7677419355 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 58.1214874552 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.6 10.9000537634 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.09 8.01818996416 101% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 86.8835125448 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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