Color photography has eliminated the need for realism in artistic painting, in the opinion of a number of art scholars and artists. At the same time, many members of the art community still feel that realistic artwork is still valuable and worthwhile
The objective of the essay is the effect of color photography in artistic painting. The author has presented from two different point of views. Some of the art scholars and artists have dogged that color phtography has eliminated the need for realism in artistic painting but on the other hand other members still feel the realistic artwork is valuable.
In the prehistoric times,every memory was captured by an artist. in the present time that hours of hardwork of an artist in observing the details and engendering that over a paper is replaced by just a click of a gadget. This has made the entire process extremely efficient. The efforts not just include that of the artist but even from the receiver end sometimes.
But does this imply art has lost all its value? Obviously not. There is a huge demand followed by dearth for realistic artwork. Art exhibition fanbase is incomprehensible. This can be assyed with the instance of auctions in art exhibitions. People spend millions of dollars for realistic artwork.
In some sense, when it comes to small artwork it has lost its value with time however realistic artwork is worthwhile. While this essay propounds the loosing value of artwork it can be averted that no color photography can replace realistic photography.
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...owever realistic artwork is worthwhile. While this essay propounds the loosing value ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, so, still, while, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 19.5258426966 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 12.4196629213 32% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 14.8657303371 34% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.3162921348 53% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 33.0505617978 42% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 58.6224719101 48% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 12.9106741573 15% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1069.0 2235.4752809 48% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 213.0 442.535393258 48% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.01877934272 5.05705443957 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82027741392 4.55969084622 84% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76777187935 2.79657885939 99% => OK
Unique words: 123.0 215.323595506 57% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.577464788732 0.4932671777 117% => OK
syllable_count: 330.3 704.065955056 47% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 6.24550561798 32% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.2370786517 69% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 15.0 23.0359550562 65% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 48.8868989494 60.3974514979 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.3571428571 118.986275619 64% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.2142857143 23.4991977007 65% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.78571428571 5.21951772744 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 7.80617977528 77% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 10.2758426966 39% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.83258426966 186% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.369312004057 0.243740707755 152% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0986084314111 0.0831039109588 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.110623720443 0.0758088955206 146% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.207058287955 0.150359130593 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.133531134005 0.0667264976115 200% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 14.1392134831 69% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 48.8420337079 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 12.1743820225 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.24 12.1639044944 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.75 8.38706741573 104% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 100.480337079 59% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.8971910112 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 11.2143820225 71% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.7820224719 85% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 33.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.0 Out of 6
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