In an attempt to improve highway safety, Prunty County last year lowered its speed limit from 55 to 45 miles per hour on all county highways. But this effort has failed: the number of accidents has not decreased, and, based on reports by the highway patrol, many drivers are exceeding the speed limit. Prunty County should instead undertake the same kind of road improvement project that Butler County completed five years ago: increasing lane widths, resurfacing rough highways, and improving visibility at dangerous intersections. Today, major Butler County roads still have a 55 mph speed limit, yet there were 25 percent fewer reported accidents in Butler County this past year than there were five years ago.
Write a response in which you discuss what specific evidence is needed to evaluate the argument and explain how the evidence would weaken or strengthen the argument.
The speaker is arguing for prunty county to employ same statics undertaken by butler County five years ago but the argument does not provide enough evidence to support the claims.
Firstly the argument failed to state if drivers of butler county were complaint or not. It was reported by high way patrol how drivers of prunty county flouted the speed limit. The speaker has too affirm the compliance of butler county to the speed limit.
Secondly the argument has to clearly state the number of road users. Comparing prunty and butler county is like comparing oranges and mangoes, prunty might have more high way drivers than butler increasing it's probability of accidents recorded for prunty county.
Thirdly location of its high ways, the location of these high ways were not stated, prunty could have most of its high way located in commercially dense areas but the viscisitude is the the case for bultler county.
In conclusion, if these questions are not answered, taking same steps as butler county will not yield any desirable effect.
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e-rater score report
Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: ??? out of 6
Category: Poor Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 6 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 5 2
No. of Sentences: 8 15
No. of Words: 174 350
No. of Characters: 852 1500
No. of Different Words: 100 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.632 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.897 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.285 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 71 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 40 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 23 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 13 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 21.75 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 8.814 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.625 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.465 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.796 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.119 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 181, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...unty county flouted the speed limit. The speaker has too affirm the compliance of...
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Line 3, column 195, Rule ID: TOO_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'to affirm'?
Suggestion: to affirm
...outed the speed limit. The speaker has too affirm the compliance of butler county to the ...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 199, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error -- use past participle here: 'affirmed'.
Suggestion: affirmed
...d the speed limit. The speaker has too affirm the compliance of butler county to the ...
^^^^^^
Line 7, column 183, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: the
...ally dense areas but the viscisitude is the the case for bultler county. In conclusi...
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Line 7, column 183, Rule ID: DT_DT[1]
Message: Maybe you need to remove one determiner so that only 'the' or 'the' is left.
Suggestion: the; the
...ally dense areas but the viscisitude is the the case for bultler county. In conclusi...
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, third, thirdly, as to, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 19.6327345309 36% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 12.9520958084 23% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 11.1786427146 45% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 0.0 13.6137724551 0% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 6.0 28.8173652695 21% => OK
Preposition: 18.0 55.5748502994 32% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 7.0 16.3942115768 43% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 882.0 2260.96107784 39% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 174.0 441.139720559 39% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.06896551724 5.12650576532 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.63192868298 4.56307096286 80% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.33636064303 2.78398813304 84% => OK
Unique words: 98.0 204.123752495 48% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.563218390805 0.468620217663 120% => OK
syllable_count: 268.2 705.55239521 38% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59920159681 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 4.96107784431 20% => OK
Article: 3.0 8.76447105788 34% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.70958083832 37% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.67365269461 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.22255489022 24% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 19.7664670659 40% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 22.8473053892 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.2250806823 57.8364921388 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.25 119.503703932 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.75 23.324526521 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.875 5.70786347227 173% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 5.15768463074 97% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.25449101796 95% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.20758483034 24% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 6.88822355289 44% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.67664670659 64% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.179301599316 0.218282227539 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0919174718037 0.0743258471296 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.051899844318 0.0701772020484 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.101378586579 0.128457276422 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0599054023445 0.0628817314937 95% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 14.3799401198 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 48.3550499002 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.1628742515 43% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 12.197005988 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 12.5979740519 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.85 8.32208582834 106% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 98.500998004 47% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 12.3882235529 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 11.1389221557 93% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.9071856287 84% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 33.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.0 Out of 6
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