Some people believe that young people are giving more importance to books and movies to learn about the lesson of life than real life experiences.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It is argued often that young adults while learning about life experiences, they give lesser importance to learn about life lessons through real life situations as compared to films and books. It is been asked to what extent this essay agrees or disagree to this notion? To reply this essay firmly concurs with this statement. Firstly, it will discuss books can provide good examples to learn about such experiences before facing them, and secondly, it will look over the examples set in the films have many advantages.
As we know this world is full of good literature with many examples provided by author regarding life experiences that one can learn from head on before embarking to their journey. Such books are based on authors or someone’s real life experiences, which can assist the reader to learn from them and use such examples in their daily life. Precedent set by the famous author of the United Kingdom in his book called “The way of life” is unprecedented. He has set many examples for the people to learn how to handle different situations of life and prepare them well so one do not need to worry about different life situation they have to go through in the future. Therefore, it can said that books can provide its reader better chance to learn about the real life experiences than facing them head on.
Moreover, moving animations have illustrated many examples to its audience to learn about real life experiences through its staff specifically the Hero of the movie. In most films, hero is the main character who goes through many difficult situations in his life, which anyone can use to learn from them and to get knowledge about in advance how to tackle such situation. Actor in the movie Harry potter is a prime example. Despite facing countless difficult situations in his life he always remained humble to its elders.
To conclude, this essay strongly concurred with this claim because books can provide numerous examples to its reader and movies can provide the physical illustrations how to deal with different situation of life.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 681, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: 'say'
Suggestion: say
...hrough in the future. Therefore, it can said that books can provide its reader bette...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, look, moreover, regarding, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 24.0651302605 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 65.0 41.998997996 155% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1719.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 350.0 315.596192385 111% => OK
Chars per words: 4.91142857143 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32530772707 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51344304061 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.494285714286 0.561755894193 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 531.9 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 55.6720077685 49.4020404114 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.785714286 106.682146367 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.0 20.7667163134 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.5 7.06120827912 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.318117126142 0.244688304435 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.115560125624 0.084324248473 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0791768731765 0.0667982634062 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.18943957537 0.151304729494 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0859373237681 0.056905535591 151% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 50.2224549098 109% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.03 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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