The percentage of overweigh children in western society has increased by almost 20% in last ten years. Discuss the cause qnd effect of this trend.
Inclining the rate of obesity has become a trend among children in western nations in the last decade. Various reasons are being held responsible for this problem, this leads to determental effects on children health and as well as on society.
It is fairly easy to comprehend why this trend of obesity gaining grounds. The preponrent reason is poor diet. As the prolific increase in the number of fast food restaurants like LFC,MCD,Pizza huy and the food that serverd is unhealthy;consequently youngsters get addictive to processed food and reduce the consumption of healthy food like fruits and vegetables. Moreover,less physical activities is second major reason behind this problem. Because of the advancement in technology there are many gadgets like cell phones, computer,video games have become q part of everyone's life.And children getting glued with them and never take part in exercise. Thus, packed food and sendentry life style are the reasons of this worry.
Meanwhile, it has some detrimental effects on children. It effects children's mental and physical health. As they become a lethargic which leads to diabetes,high blood pressure and heart attack problems and if they become a patient of diabetes thay have to depend on insulin for the rest of their life. Moreover, bullying by society also hurt their self esteem. They cannot face society with confidence and it leads to depression. So obesity has become a cause of these effects.
Conclusively, unhealthy eating habits and addiction of technology gadgets leads to the problem of gaining weight among young minds as well as effects their physical and mental health.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, if, moreover, second, so, thus, well, while, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1383.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 261.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.29885057471 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0193898071 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9421695183 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.586206896552 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 416.7 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 67.6046020787 49.4020404114 137% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.2 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.4 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 7.06120827912 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.168127197695 0.244688304435 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0631480089556 0.084324248473 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0516760704741 0.0667982634062 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.105692820876 0.151304729494 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0695989540913 0.056905535591 122% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.16 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.71 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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