You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
Your neighbours have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your house/ flat.
Write a letter to your neighbours. In your letter
explain the reasons for the noise
apologise
describe what action you will take
You should write at least 150 words.
Dear Shruti,
Hope everything is well at your end.I received your letter two days back. I am writing this to apologise for the trouble you are facing due to the repair work that is going on.
Actually,there is a leakage in the water tap,mainly in kitchen.I tried my best using various ways to stop the same but couldn't fix it.So,finally gave this work to professional contractor.Another important aspect is all above floor pipelines are interconnected.If the problem persists, there will be a trouble to the people staying around due to continuous leak.
Now, I know as a next door neighbour;it is disturbing you a lot. I have informed the contractor to come early in the morning when all your family members are at work or college.Also,I have requested to send more workers to finish the work in time.Thankfully,he agreed and has given an assurance of minimal noise while repairing .They will try to finish work maximum by 6:00 pm.
I really appreciate the co-operation you have given till now.
Yours sincerely,
Natasha
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 13, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Shruti, Hope everything is well at your end.I re...
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Line 2, column 37, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: I
..., Hope everything is well at your end.I received your letter two days back. I a...
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Line 2, column 178, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ue to the repair work that is going on. Actually,there is a leakage in the water...
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Line 4, column 9, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , there
...air work that is going on. Actually,there is a leakage in the water tap,mainly in...
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Line 4, column 45, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , mainly
...ally,there is a leakage in the water tap,mainly in kitchen.I tried my best using variou...
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Line 4, column 64, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: I
...kage in the water tap,mainly in kitchen.I tried my best using various ways to sto...
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Line 4, column 120, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: couldn't
...using various ways to stop the same but couldnt fix it.So,finally gave this work to pro...
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Line 4, column 135, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: So
...ays to stop the same but couldnt fix it.So,finally gave this work to professional ...
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Line 4, column 137, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , finally
...s to stop the same but couldnt fix it.So,finally gave this work to professional contract...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Another
...ve this work to professional contractor.Another important aspect is all above floor pip...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: If
...bove floor pipelines are interconnected.If the problem persists, there will be a t...
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Line 4, column 363, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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... staying around due to continuous leak. Now, I know as a next door neighbour;it ...
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Line 6, column 178, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Also
...r family members are at work or college.Also,I have requested to send more workers t...
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , I
...mily members are at work or college.Also,I have requested to send more workers to ...
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Line 6, column 248, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Thankfully
...more workers to finish the work in time.Thankfully,he agreed and has given an assurance of...
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Line 6, column 258, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , he
...rs to finish the work in time.Thankfully,he agreed and has given an assurance of mi...
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Line 6, column 328, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...surance of minimal noise while repairing .They will try to finish work maximum by ...
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Line 6, column 330, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: They
...rance of minimal noise while repairing .They will try to finish work maximum by 6:00...
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Line 8, column 17, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... have given till now. Yours sincerely, Natasha
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, finally, if, really, so, well, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 32.9175257732 67% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 861.0 937.175257732 92% => OK
No of words: 172.0 206.0 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.00581395349 4.54256449028 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.62144681703 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.22390405073 2.54303337028 127% => OK
Unique words: 121.0 127.690721649 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.703488372093 0.622605031667 113% => OK
syllable_count: 265.5 290.88556701 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 12.6804123711 55% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 16.3608247423 147% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 123.878314223 44.8134815571 276% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 123.0 76.5299724578 161% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.5714285714 16.8248392259 146% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.14285714286 4.34317383033 187% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 19.0 2.54639175258 746% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.217502482956 0.216113520407 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.111282078757 0.0766984524023 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0607661905642 0.0603063233224 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.117630799494 0.12726935374 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0930281487822 0.0580467560999 160% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 8.37731958763 173% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 70.7449484536 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 7.45979381443 154% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 8.71597938144 138% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.22 7.59969072165 108% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 41.2886597938 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 8.62886597938 168% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 8.54432989691 136% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 8.15463917526 147% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.