Nowadays young people spend too much of their free time in shopping malls. This has negative effects on themselves and the society they live in. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
It has become a tendency or say a fashion now a days, to spend time in shopping malls,especially among youngsters.But,many believe that in this way,our generation is wasting their precious time;which I think is true. I disagree with the idea that spending too much time in these malls is delivering negative effects.
We can not stop or force young people to where they should spend their time and how much.They are capable enough to take this decision as an individual ,keeping in mind all the consequences.They share ideas, make memories by taking pictures together,sharing thought process and few of them work as well sitting at a place in a mall. Unfortunately,it is seen as a waste of time and up to certain extent, true because every youngster won't work or do some useful activities.Since, majority of the youngsters are willing to stay inside the malls, the outdoor environment of their local area will be much more clearer.Furthermore, if any of them is interested in doing a part time business, to help at home or to gain an experience;malls are the best locations as they give security and comfort.
On the other hand, it is equally true that most of the young people now a days want to follow fashion blindly.They spend ample of money in buying branded clothes and accessories instead of spending their crucial time and money into studies. With their spare time in hand,instead they can participate in an activity that can be beneficial to the society or a community like cleaning the beach,collecting trash, helping poor kids in studies free of cost and many more.
In conclusion,it is not recommended to spend the leisure time in malls but I do not believe that it will have negative impact on society.
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Message: Did you mean 'nowadays'?
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, if, so, well, i think, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1432.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 293.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.88737201365 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13729897018 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.27472935453 2.80592935109 117% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.600682593857 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 446.4 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 16.0721442886 44% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 41.0 20.2975951904 202% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 111.321560337 49.4020404114 225% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 204.571428571 106.682146367 192% => OK
Words per sentence: 41.8571428571 20.7667163134 202% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 10.4285714286 7.06120827912 148% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 22.0 5.01903807615 438% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.338138714801 0.244688304435 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.158180429359 0.084324248473 188% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0577881682095 0.0667982634062 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.194626605258 0.151304729494 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.046896262326 0.056905535591 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 22.5 13.0946893788 172% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.32 50.2224549098 76% => OK
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 18.1 11.3001002004 160% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.97 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.9 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 9.78957915832 194% => OK
gunning_fog: 18.4 10.1190380762 182% => OK
text_standard: 19.0 10.7795591182 176% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.