In some countries government are encouraging industries and business to move out of cities and into regional areas.
Do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages
Alterations usually occur for new and better but sometimes it also handovers adverse ramifications said by many philophors.Likewise, in some countries' authorities plan to switch industrial sector and firms to rural area from urban.According to my opinion, this phenomenon has umpteen of merits which outrace demerits.
On the one hand, one obivious disadvantage came out from the shifting of industries and business to remote sities is that it puts barriers in growth.To explain, undoubtedly ,developing or undeveloped areas are towns or villages which do not have proper resources to run business smoothly such as electricity supply,water supply and road infrastructure also.for higher growth ,one company needs all considerable requirements because if it does not have these than how firm supply or receive products.Therefore, hurdles can be faced by redocation of working areas.
On the other hand, there are multifarious merits of stimulate to industries and business for shifting to downtrodden areas .To embark with, it assists to equilibrium in environment.To be more precise, when all industries pollute the area which is clean then it absorby all contaminant of air and so forth.However,in cities not only industrial area rises pollution but also traffic and overcrowd upsurge pressure on atmosphere.Resultantly,less pollutes have clean and safe environment .
Another positive aspect of this phenomenon is ,it is lucrative for business administration. In other words,labour wage and it's availability is best and suitable for higher profit earning.for example, in cities coverage cost of labour per hour is around 18 dollors to 25 dollors ,but in nearby towns workforce is ready to do work on less than 15 dollors the reason behind is an development and excess of unemployed .So, economic advantages would be taken by industries if these move to rural side.
In conclusion, although dearth of basic amenities is one major bad of locomotion of industrial department through the pressure of governments power ,but several benefits prove it worthwhile to economy and environment.At the end, advantages outweigh disadvantages.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, likewise, so, then, therefore, while, for example, in conclusion, such as, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 10.4138276553 182% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1819.0 1615.20841683 113% => OK
No of words: 324.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.61419753086 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24264068712 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.58222568083 2.80592935109 128% => OK
Unique words: 209.0 176.041082164 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.645061728395 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 579.6 506.74238477 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 12.0 4.76152304609 252% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 16.0721442886 37% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 54.0 20.2975951904 266% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 153.661333964 49.4020404114 311% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 303.166666667 106.682146367 284% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 54.0 20.7667163134 260% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 22.0 7.06120827912 312% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 26.0 5.01903807615 518% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.211466073059 0.244688304435 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0889410384672 0.084324248473 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0255839186952 0.0667982634062 38% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.100335462985 0.151304729494 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0123945319738 0.056905535591 22% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 32.0 13.0946893788 244% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -0.25 50.2224549098 -0% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 17.1 7.44779559118 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 26.7 11.3001002004 236% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 16.15 12.4159519038 130% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.38 8.58950901804 132% => OK
difficult_words: 104.0 78.4519038076 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 32.5 9.78957915832 332% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 23.6 10.1190380762 233% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 27.0 10.7795591182 250% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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