Many times people accept the bad situation while some people try to solve the problem. Discuss both the sides and give your opinion.
Many times people think that they should accept any bad situations they face in their life, while some people prefer challenging the dire situation in order to improvised their condition rather than sitting in one place and do nothing. In my opinion, people should be optimistic about their life and should think about how to tackle the problems as they come. Personally, I feel they should try to solve their problems; in life, humans will face many difficulties, and if you do not learn to face the issues, you will be left with no option but to accept the sad reality.
Sometimes people tend to accept the bad situations when they have no other options to go with. It so happens that they are fed up with their life; they are depressed and have struggled so much that they don't see any other options apart from accepting the reality. They are broken. Being a human, one has to face many different phases of their life, including when there is no one to accompany you. And when this happens human mind has a tendency to develop negative thoughts, which are way more powerful than positive ones. Thus, they accept these bad situations when they have no other path to take.
But, there are people out there, no matter how many things go wrong, who will always be optimistic about the situations, and rather than complaining, they will always try to figure out the solution. Even optimistic people struggled in their lives, but what makes them different from the pessimistic ones is their way of seeing their lives and valuing their dreams and opportunities. They never give up and always trust the process.
To conclude, people who have loosed hope in their life always tend to accept reality and never attempt to fight it, while optimistic people will always try till the last moment and face the problem with their full strength.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, thus, while, apart from, as to, i feel, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 24.0651302605 158% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1521.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 320.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.753125 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22948505376 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.31241342743 2.80592935109 82% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.5 0.561755894193 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 461.7 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 66.8481454957 49.4020404114 135% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.0 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.6153846154 20.7667163134 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.07692307692 7.06120827912 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.224431889767 0.244688304435 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.087909681626 0.084324248473 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0784390201595 0.0667982634062 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.153360417254 0.151304729494 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.062041649057 0.056905535591 109% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.04 50.2224549098 128% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.57 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.44 8.58950901804 87% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 78.4519038076 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 18.5 9.78957915832 189% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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