Write a letter to a friend who is visiting your country for the first time.
- Tell him the best time of the year to come.
- What places they could visit
- Invite them to come to your house
Dear Leena,
Hope this letter finds you in a good health. It is so nice to hear from you after a long time. I am really glad that you have made a lovely decision to visit India. Since this is the first time you are visiting my country, I want to tell you the best time to visit is during winter. It starts from November to end of February.
There are many places to visit in this season but as you are fond of Camel safari and desserts, I recommend you to visit Rajasthan, Jaiselmer and Jodhpur in particular. Also,you will love variety of Rajasthani cuisines that includes Onion kachori, dal-bati churma, moong dal kachori and a very famous sweet called "Ghewar". It will be a great experience for you to stay in a specially built tents with similar kind of facilities as hotel. Do not forget to bring your Camera as this place has mesmerizing views to capture.
You will be glad to know that I stay in Jodhpur only and that too near the airport. Do plan a visit to meet me and my parents and make a stay at our place.
Can't wait to meet you soon.
Best Regards,
Natasha.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 12, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Leena, Hope this letter finds you in a good hea...
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , you
...aiselmer and Jodhpur in particular. Also,you will love variety of Rajasthani cuisine...
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Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: Can't; Cannot
...parents and make a stay at our place. Cant wait to meet you soon. Best Regards, ...
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Line 6, column 14, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...t wait to meet you soon. Best Regards, Natasha.
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Line 7, column 10, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...et you soon. Best Regards, Natasha.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, really, so, in particular, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 32.9175257732 94% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 26.3917525773 114% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 891.0 937.175257732 95% => OK
No of words: 203.0 206.0 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.38916256158 4.54256449028 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.77462671648 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4809106423 2.54303337028 98% => OK
Unique words: 127.0 127.690721649 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.625615763547 0.622605031667 100% => OK
syllable_count: 279.9 290.88556701 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.9224183303 44.8134815571 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 68.5384615385 76.5299724578 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.6153846154 16.8248392259 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 4.34317383033 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.16562109223 0.216113520407 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0587529804431 0.0766984524023 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0670663266884 0.0603063233224 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0818859265681 0.12726935374 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.065907878163 0.0580467560999 114% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.1 8.37731958763 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 70.7449484536 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.89 8.71597938144 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.57 7.59969072165 100% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 41.2886597938 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.