The widespread use of the Internet has brought many problems. What do you think are the main problems associated with the use of the web? What solutions can you suggest?
It is believed that the prevalence of the Internet has brought numerous drawbacks, besides benefits. In this essay, I will outline the main cons of this issue and draw some solutions.
The widespread of the Internet causes certain disadvantages. Firstly, it may cause the over-dependence on technology, therefore people could be in a technology-saturated world. If they do not go online one day, they might be furious, eventually not aware of anything occurring in their real lives. Secondly, the fast growth of the Internet could be a great chance for cybercriminals to steal personal information and use it for illegal purposes. Another problem is that in this digital age, people are reducing traditional means of communicating, instead, they will glue to the screen and form virtual relationships. As a result, the lack of social skills and face some health problems are likely to happen.
Some measures should be drawn to resolve the issue. Decreasing the use of the Internet is reckoned to depend on each individual’s awareness, hence, each person should make it difficult to access it. For instance, turning the laptop or smartphone off and put it in a drawer can make it harder to impulse to check emails, send a message, and google. In addition, there are several apps developed to control time spent online and productivity on smartphones and desktops. Using these apps lets users set a daily limit for surfing websites and find out what sites are commonly visited.
In conclusion, the Internet is one of the greatest technological breakthroughs that mankind has made, however, the explosion in its use also leads to many problems. Therefore, it is essential to learn to use it well and reap the benefits, not the drawbacks.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, first, firstly, hence, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1454.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 286.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.08391608392 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11236361783 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.08666607484 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.625874125874 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 456.3 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.9032949734 49.4020404114 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.9333333333 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0666666667 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.86666666667 7.06120827912 140% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.184790592207 0.244688304435 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0511302467328 0.084324248473 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0356754786106 0.0667982634062 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0969355183024 0.151304729494 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0212116061748 0.056905535591 37% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.18 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.22 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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